10 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2011 09:59 am Title: Chapter 2
Okay. First chapter: super hot! Second chapter: even hotter! I love the style you've used for this. So steamy and in love and surprised and familiar all at once. Which is exactly how I would picture their love-making to be at this point in their relationship. You write Jim's POV very well!
Author's Response: Ya know, weird thing about me, I flippin' hate reading anything in the 2nd person. Like, totally detest it. And yet, I love to write in it. /meaningless tidbits of info about me.
Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you thought I captured Jim well. Sometimes I think I'm too girly and make him out to be too perfect, but... I blame the Office writers for that. Damn youse guise! I mean, how can I not write him as the perfect man when he sets the bar so. damn. high?! lol
9 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2011 07:36 am Title: Chapter 2
Woohooooooo! Sara, you are a-w-e-s-o-m-e! Unexpected updates are always, always welcome :D While the sex was certainly hot, I love Jim's reminiscences just as much <3
Author's Response: Thanks Nan! An a-w-e-s-o-m-e from you is pretty much an Oscar for me, so I'm going to go write my acceptance speech and cry in front of my mirror. I'm an ugly crier, so don't expect pictures or anything. F'reals. <3
10 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2011 04:46 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm never sure how to comment on smut stories, but I will say, these two chapters were hot, no doubt. But the last bit of this second chapter is the best part IMHO - France? That’s easy. You’re also going to marry her someday, make her the mother of your children someday, spend the rest of your lives together someday. You inhale the coconut scent of her shampoo and exhale, content. I like how you phrased it with the repetitive someday.
Author's Response: Thanks! I know, the saucy chapters are a wee bit awky to comment on, but I'm glad you did :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2011 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yesterday's chapter was awesome, this was awesomer. Seriously, girl. You are a smut legend :)It's not only hot, but it's soooo Jim and Pam, that it's awesome. Keep them coming, you really are fantastico.
Re the Pratt webcamc hallenge. I suggested it on the MTT board in the chalenge section, but it's just what it sounds like, wouldn't that be an exciting and smutty little fic? Lots of people wanted it. Make our dreams come true LOL
Author's Response: Thanks Hannah! I'll definitely noodle over the webcam fic... I've got some naughty ideas stored away that might be perfect for that :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2011 08:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE this! So sweet and funny and SO damn sexy. I love how it shows their growing familiarity with another other but still shows the newness and excitement of being with one another. I've always wondered which sex tape Pam would've tried to purchase. Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks Tuna! And I love the screenname sofuckingmuch haha - too funny!
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2011 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Geez, you're such a perv...
*reads again...adds to favourites...*
That wassohot, and linking back to the sex tape was genious. Jim is definitely a breast man, I don't know why I have always thought so lol. Anyway, as usual this was wonderful. You write smut so perfectly for these two. Write moreeeeeee :)
I think you should take on the Pratt webcam challenge ;)
Author's Response: Thanks doll! Pratt webcam challenge? I don't think I've seen this yet... And still, my brain starts to turn to dirty, filthy areas. I might need to take a gander at this ;)
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2011 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Making a salad... innocent enough. And then my brain momentarily broke. Holy crap. HOT. Awesome job
Author's Response: Salad always leads to hot JAM sexin', didn't cha know? Haha, thanks more_awake :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2011 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that was good! I think you should continue this in a Parisian doorway (or hotel room). Either one would be fine! :)
Author's Response: Mmm, hotel room sexin'. JAM hotel room sexin'. Hooooot. Thanks PMH!
9 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2011 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yumumyumyumyum :) Wasn't *that* a perfect way to end the day?! Pam's thought of underestimating what Jim was packing made me snort :D Nice job, sister.
Author's Response: Nan, you make me blush :) Thanks!