Date: June 14, 2011 07:19 am Title: Chapter 2
She is almost afraid to talk for fear that she will burst out into tears, so instead she just nods and whispers “me too”, dropping her purse on the ground and wrapping her arms around him. “I’m sorry,” he whispers, “I’m so sorry”. Guh. That's just...it hits me right in the heart.
This is perfection: When he looks at her she’s smiling and she looks giddy, she looks in love, it nearly makes his heart stop she is so beautiful. “God me too. You have no idea.” “Come inside. Please. Don’t leave.” She punctuates the question with a pointed look, her meaning clearly not lost on him...“Come with me.” Seriously perfect, achingly romantic, just enough. Beautiful job. I am just loving these new relationship fics <3
Author's Response: I love your reviews, I love hearing about things that readers enjoyed, I love that something I write can strike a chord with someone, your reviews make me want to keep writing and writing, so be careful ;) Thank you, as always, Nan!
Date: June 14, 2011 07:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Back as promised, kells. I was looking forward to reading this again.
Sitting on her porch steps, leaning against the railing, he sits up and peers out every time a car turns on to her street, then deflating and settling back in when it’s not her. He stares up at a crystal clear sky, now dark with stars shining, and tries to forget the day, forget the guilt that has been weighing on him since this morning. He’s hoping that seeing her will put him at ease. Perfectly beautiful paragraph, its details just right, conveying Jim's inner musings. A lovely compliment to this: He probably needed time to process it all, clear the air with Karen, and now she can’t shake the guilt she has after spending so much time with Jim and feeling utterly blissful while Karen probably spent the weekend crying, missing him and feeling abandoned. To me it shows that they're kindred spirits, good people in a bad situation, but with lots of good stuff on the horizon :)
Date: June 12, 2011 11:30 am Title: Chapter 2
Love.
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you miss hoo!! Thanks for reading ;)
10 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2011 08:54 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww very cute :) I love me some early JAM!
Author's Response: Thank you - and me too - I love this time of their relationship - so many things we don't know, so many possibilities, I love that we can fill it all in with fanfic ;)
8 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2011 08:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohh great start :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2011 04:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Kells, drive-by review here just to let you know how much I loved this story. I promise to come back and give you a proper review later.
Author's Response: Thanks Nan! We all owe you a debt of gratitude you always manage to keep this place chugging along ;)
9 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2011 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
There is something so sweetly poignant about your writing. You do a fantastic job of surrounding the reader in the emotions Jim and Pam are feeling.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Jinx! What a great compliment! I think their story is so rich with emotion I just love exploring nearly every phase of their relationship. Thanks for reading & reviewing :)
Date: June 11, 2011 09:46 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad you decided to dust this one off. It's a nice little take on what that day must have been like. Hopefully you have some more ideas floating around in your head.:)
Author's Response: Thanks KH!! I would have loved to have seen how it all went down when they first started dating - thank goodness for fanfic to help fill in the blanks!!