Date: July 18, 2011 10:54 am Title: Chapter 4
Where are youuuuuuu?????
Date: June 25, 2011 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
Sorry for the delay in my review. How I wish this is what we could have seen on the show. I love everything about it. I can't wait for the next.
Date: June 24, 2011 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
so, so good. Good for both of them being clear; Jim with his needs, Pam with her words. And a kiss, at last.
Looking forward to Chapter 5!
9 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2011 03:39 am Title: Chapter 4
Still so loving this. I never get tired of reading what if stories about the first three seasons, and you're definitely delivering. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
10 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2011 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! I can't wait to read the conclusion.
Date: June 23, 2011 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
P.S. Forgot to mention that that's my favorite song on 21 :)
Date: June 23, 2011 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!! Did you hear that? You must have since, if I recall correctly, you don't live all that far from me: D My heart's going pitter pat, too =) Perfectly in character. I could envision this so clearly. More more more!
10 [Report This]Date: June 19, 2011 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
His insisting that he follows her home, after all they've gone through during that time period, speaks volumes of how much he cares about her. Love this little "bridge" as you called it, and can't wait for the next update!
Date: June 18, 2011 05:03 am Title: Chapter 3
S3 parking lot tension you could cut with Dwight's machete...I'm hooked. You've captured their conflicting emotions and the mood so succinctly - just what it takes to build this sort of taut momentum. Looking forward to the charming third...thanks for this, babe :)
Date: June 17, 2011 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
Argh! The anxiety I feel! The comment about he used to tell himself if he ever had even just "one chance to be with Pam" he'd grab it, well, it gave me great hope that Jim might be willing to risk it.
Risk it, Jim! In the parking lot of Chapter 4 please!
Date: June 17, 2011 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really like this line: "The desperation of clinging to someone that you weren’t even sure you wanted, simply to keep from drowning in the pain of missing someone else" Well put. And him trying to resist this seems spot on. Very nice body language descriptions. More, please.
Date: June 17, 2011 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
You really have Pam's voice down in this one. I can hear her saying every word, hesitating, backtracking, unsure. Nice job.
Date: June 17, 2011 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooooh, this is going to be good.
10 [Report This]Date: June 17, 2011 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
Nice little filler chapter. I can't wait to read the conversation in the next parking lot.
10 [Report This]Date: June 17, 2011 11:06 am Title: Chapter 2
They don't write 'em like this anymore. This is fantastic.
Date: June 17, 2011 06:31 am Title: Chapter 2
She misses having that, having that person who loves you and wants to keep you safe. She knows that she can be safe, can be okay, without it, but it doesn’t fill the void nonetheless.
I love this line. I've felt this way many times in my life and that's just a perfect way to describe it.
8 [Report This]Date: June 17, 2011 05:19 am Title: Chapter 2
Great start :) can't wait to read more!
Date: June 16, 2011 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ohhh I am crying! Pam said some wonderful things. Jom was hurt so bad he can't even fatheom tha Pam would ever change her mind from "I can't"...
Write, write! I need to know what happens next!
Date: June 16, 2011 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love fic set during this timeframe. The angst and the anticipation is wonderful. I love waiting for the moment they both realize they are on the same page. I'm really enjoying this and the fast updates really add to how much I am liking it.
Date: June 16, 2011 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
I heart quick updates so very much :) This was wonderfully painful. I can't wait to read more drama, angst, heartbreak and whatever else you have in store!
10 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. can't wait to read the next chapter!
9 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
The tension is very much there, I could see it all happening. I liked this a lot and look forward to the next chapter! Will they be able to mend fences on this particular night? Or is the pain too much for them to move past it. I hope we get to find out soon!
Date: June 16, 2011 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have to admit I am a sucker for angst as well. That was such a sad time for this couple. I am excited to see where you are taking us.:)
Date: June 16, 2011 11:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Love it! At work, so can't write much...
9 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 07:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay! I'm a sucker for this angsty time period. Continue please!