Date: July 27, 2011 03:42 pm Title: We turn the dirt with our palms cupped like shovels
This is sad, of course, but so very in character and beautiful. The part about seeing Cece with the bear and waves of grief really rang true, as did Jim and Pam's interactions. Well done.
10 [Report This]Date: July 08, 2011 07:06 pm Title: We turn the dirt with our palms cupped like shovels
That was so beautiful and so so sad. I'd love to see you continue this, maybe justto show how Jim copes with the grief, and how he takes the news of a new baby.
Everything about that really was lovely! Just like all your stories.
Date: July 08, 2011 06:27 pm Title: We turn the dirt with our palms cupped like shovels
Hard subject matter but so good. I have to admit I cried remembering some of my memories when my dad died. I loved the connection Jim and Pam had without many words.
Date: July 08, 2011 03:37 pm Title: We turn the dirt with our palms cupped like shovels
*snif*
Aw, man. :(
Thanks for this, even though it made me cry a little. I love seeing anything new from you.
9 [Report This]Date: July 08, 2011 01:41 pm Title: We turn the dirt with our palms cupped like shovels
Bashert, my dear, I love when you come to visit. Even though this story is sad, it was a joy to read. I liked the way you formatted the quotes. I can't properly quote my favorite passages, but I love Jim's observation that Cecelia is too busy to speak in full sentences :) I also enjoyed the idea of keeping good and bad memories to yourself--very touching. Splendid job!
10 [Report This]Date: July 08, 2011 12:50 pm Title: We turn the dirt with our palms cupped like shovels
This is heartbreaking! Poor Jim!