Date: May 13, 2012 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
China was one of my favorites of season 7 because of Jim and Pam's conversation in the stairwell, so I was glad to see a story based on this! It didn't disappoint! You did a great job showing their commitment to one another. Thanks for all of the stories you've been writing! I may not get to review often, but I always enjoy them!
10 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2012 12:28 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so sweet! :-)
I really think you captured that bittersweet mood of this particular episode, and it rings true because we've all been there, you know? (I know I have.) Writing about regrets can be difficult, but you did a great job here - and you ended on a positive note, too! (Methinks Pam doesn't give herself enough credit on the show either.)
Date: May 08, 2012 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is lovely-- I love that scene in the stairwell, so it's nice to get to read more of it....it's SO great that you're posting again. Much appreciated.
10 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2012 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
First, is it okay if I start a slow clap {I am a big fan of the slow clap} for you and the others that are keeping the Most Recent page exciting again with your wonderful story telling? I am a horrible person and have been reading but failing to review, but I promise to try harder and let you know how much I'm enjoying your work.
This story was awesome! I cannot wait to read more from you!
10 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2012 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
*SIGH* The way you bring in little snippets from the show itself just makes me all warm and fuzzy. Amazing as usual.
Date: May 08, 2012 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
That scene in the show broke my heart, so I'm glad you decided to expand upon it. I love how supportive Jim is of her in this. It's so obvious how much he cares for her and wants her to feel good about herself, and it's just so sweet :)
Date: May 08, 2012 05:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh I could just picture this, these two.
"You know what I love," he whispered, nudging the back of her head with his nose. "I love when you draw those cartoon pictures for Cece. She loves them, I'm telling you. I tried the other night while you were out with Penny, and she hated them. She said, 'Daddy, you can't draw like mommy, don't even bother trying.'" That is so adorable and so very Jim.
I'm so thrilled that these past eps are inspiring you, Danielle. You're doing a fine job.
10 [Report This]Date: May 07, 2012 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nawwwww so sweet. I can just imagine Jim whispering these things in her ear. I loved that moment in China because it was finally the show addressing something that I feel Pam *would* be insecure about and all Jim could do was wrap his arms around her. But you took that moment and made it even sweeter. Nice work! And I added it to the series - not quite sure why no one else can but as long as you don't mind waiting for a while, I'll happily add it. :)