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Reviewer: Rebecca Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2006 06:43 am Title: Chapter 1

finally has some guts, i loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you!  Can't wait to see how this plays out on the show:)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2006 06:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh please oh please oh please!!!  This?  Would be awesome.  And in character. 

I need to see it happen. 

Great job!



Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  I need to see it, too:)  I'm going crazy over here!!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2006 04:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, this is perfect. Pam really does need to make the next move. I love how simple it is here. You capture their voices beautifully.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!!  Yes, she certainly does.  It's all on her...she better not disappoint:)

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2006 04:23 am Title: Chapter 1

Finally, indeed. This was so satisfying to read; it's got to be Pam who makes the first decisive move like this. Only a phone call away. Great dialogue too.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  It is really time for her to do something, right? 

Reviewer: mandy. Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2006 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1

i love it.  i read it right after i watched the scene 4 times in a row on youtube.  Really gave me the warm and fuzzies.  :D



Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad:)  That scene is really addictive, isn't it???  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think "Finally" is the perfect title for this story, because -- yes, FINALLY.  They need to do this. 

I will say this, though:  I had to go back and re-read a couple times to make sure that Pam was the one who said "I miss you" first.  I was really glad she was, though.  I think it will change everything if she says that.  And man, I would beat myself up for days, too, if I'd been her.  Can you imagine how many times she's replayed that in her mind?  Wow, I am really obsessed. 



Author's Response: Ha!  We both are.  Sorry that wasn't more clear....yes, Pam definitely was the first to say 'I miss you.'  It was a must!  Thanks for reading:)

Reviewer: unfold Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Maybe it's the combination of being ridiculously tired and having just watched the Phone Call twice in a row in addition to the Kiss and a fanvid, but this? This made pushed me over the edge and I am now sobbing. I want this to happen, need this to happen. 

The dialogue was perfectly in character. And it was just fantastic.  



Author's Response: Oh, you are so sweet!  I actually have to pull myself away from the t.v.  They are ruining me!!!  Thanks for reading:)

Reviewer: GreenEyes Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well, this couldn't have been cuter. Really, really lovely. Great dialogue, I could hear it playing out and it made perfect sense and was completely in character. Guh. Adorable!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!  I appreciate it.  They are so fun to write:)

Reviewer: shannanagin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

This fic made me giddy.

Damn Ryan and Dwight for interupting their phone call. They really could have talked for hours. And you know what? I would have listened to every freaking minute of it. (Dork)

Lovely fic. Lovey characterization. Wonderful job.



Author's Response: Then we are both dorks!  If the 3rd season dvd doesn't have more of this conversation, I will be disappointed.  Thanks so much!!

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