7 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2012 07:38 pm Title: Change
This is interesting, and I look forward to seeing where you go with it. Just a reminder, please make sure you start each chapter with a disclaimer. It's silly, I know, but it's something we want to keep up on the archive :)
I know you said this was AU, but I'm confused as to when this is set. I might be being blonde, so sorry if that's the case lol. I see Deedldee offered to beta for you. I always say every good writer should have a decent beta behind them, and she's one of the best :)
Date: October 21, 2012 06:45 pm Title: Change
Something's up with your word fiance, it's not coming out right.
Interested to see where you're going. When is this supposed to be set during? I know it says AU, but I'm slightly confused by the 'before R announces engagement' part, but Andy's there and he wasn't there in season 2, and Pam wasn't engaged in season 3. Sorry for that, hope you find it constructive, and if you need a beta just let me know I'd be happy to help. I would like to read the rest of this story so please do continue.
Date: October 21, 2012 06:39 pm Title: Change
I like where this is going. Can't wait for 5:30 to roll around in their world.
Date: October 20, 2012 02:30 pm Title: Change
Yes, more please.