10 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2013 03:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I haven't left a review in forever but I felt compelled to do so after reading this. This was truly heartbreakingly beautiful and beautifully heartbreaking stuff. I hate how broken and disjointed they seem on the show and you really conveyed just how hard this is hitting Pam. And how they both seem to have forgotten who they are to each other. For the sake of this oneshot, I think it's perfect you ended with doubt and questioning. That's very real, especially with the evidence stacking up against her. But for the sake of my sanity, I sure hope they have a happier resolution! Nicely done :)
Date: February 20, 2013 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1
I wish I could convey how much I loved this piece. It's how I see them right now. Heartbreaking, but fantastic! Thank you.
Date: February 18, 2013 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excellent work. Very real. There is really nothing quite like the feeling of wanting things to be okay but not being able to get there. This piecethe captured that feeling. These two are having to live their lives and relate to each other with this huge unresolved tension. I appreciated this peek into how it might go