Date: July 31, 2018 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think Jim will be looking for many ways to make a mess if this is his reward. Very nice.
Author's Response: Teehee! Thanks!
Date: March 14, 2017 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice "off camera" family moment. NanReg summed it up nicely, "Sweet and sexy."
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to comment! Very happy you liked it. :)
Date: March 09, 2017 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Shutterbug, this was a pleasure to read. It painted a clear picture of a happy, messy, loving family. "Even as he formed the words, his mind flashed a different image: Pam pinned to the wall, his mouth slanted over hers, her skin stamped with color--a trail of where he'd touched her." Sweet and sexy. Nice job :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! What lovely feedback! I really enjoy writing "moments," little snapshots of their lives, whether they're ordinary or extraordinary moments. It's a lot of fun. Thanks for taking the time to leave a nice comment. I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
Date: March 05, 2017 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha sweet story! I always love fics set in the present day, and this did not disappoint!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate you taking the time to comment! So glad you enjoyed it!