Date: January 07, 2019 04:10 pm Title: The One with the New Year's Fireworks
Pam sure has come a long way since chapter 1, hasn't she?
It's fine - no one ever actually pays attention to the PowerPoint presentations. Don't sweat it, Jim.
I really enjoy how sassy Pam is throughout this entire chapter... definitely laughed out loud at "The sky is blue. What's it to you?"
Date: January 07, 2019 04:03 pm Title: The One That's Merry and Bright
So, because you already know I think you're one of the best smut writers ever, I'm just going to assume that you know I enjoyed those parts of this chapter and instead, I'm gonna focus on the non-sexy details and things that I loved that stood out to me.
You know, like all of Jim's family giving Pam Bath and Body Works gifts. And Jim not knowing how to use chopsticks. The faded lipstick stain on his sweater that he didn't notice but she did. And that Jim stopped to grab cookies on the way to bed.
Seriously, please don't ever stop writing, okay?
1 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2019 09:17 pm Title: The Thankful One
Lol, I loved that chapter, loved the dirty talk, but my favorite part was your chapter end notes :)
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! The end notes were my favorite and you’re the only one who has said something, lol
1 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2019 08:48 pm Title: The One with the Big Fat Lie and the Jolly Green Giant
Why the apologies? It was hot and real. Flaws and forgiveness and understanding. That's beautiful.
1 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2019 05:40 pm Title: The One with the New Year's Fireworks
Very, very nice! Happy new year indeed. ;-)
Date: January 01, 2019 02:33 pm Title: The One with the New Year's Fireworks
Now that's the way to welcome in the New Year. Who cares if there were fireworks in any given city, Jim and Pam had plenty of their own. Lots of fun to see all these holiday chapters for sure.
1 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2018 05:31 pm Title: The One Where Pam Second Guesses Her Own Decision
Any seduction that involves a long nap, sex, and homemade cookies is the best! I love how you write.
Date: December 26, 2018 07:47 pm Title: The One That's Merry and Bright
Very sexy way for Jim and Pam to reconnect after what sounds like a crazy holiday time for them. Descriptive as always. I really like that Pam set up just a nice quiet evening for them before the real action began. Oftentimes it's moments like that, that show how special a relationship can be and this one turned out great.
1 [Report This]Date: November 22, 2018 11:26 pm Title: The One Where Pam Second Guesses Her Own Decision
so happy to finally be able to review this story!
just wanted to say that this is honestly one of my top 3 favorite jam fics ever. the way you write these two is so great and well done, it’s so refreshing to r ad such a great interpretation of the characters!
not to mention, your smutty writing is so well done, so that’s just good all around!
been following this one for a pretty long time, and can’t wait for the next update as always!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! You’re making me blush! Hopefully I continue to do it justice :)
Date: November 22, 2018 07:21 pm Title: The Thankful One
This is the chapter that just kept on giving, and I for one, am thankful for it!
I loved everything from Pam panic cleaning Jim’s place to Sangria and football on Black Friday. Jim’s rapid turn from grandma charmer to instant fear of Meemaw was pretty perfect but of course he managed to win her over in the end. Amazing.
Also amazing? The movie theater and then the return of drunk handsy Beesly in the car! So good. Even when they’re being ridiculosly sexy in the best of ways, I love that they’re always still just trying to take care of each other.
Cheers to you, your wine, and this chapter!
Author's Response:
Drunk Handsy Beesly is just hibernating ;)
I loved playing around with their different panicy holiday quirks, so I’m glad you liked it!
1 [Report This]Date: November 22, 2018 06:14 pm Title: The Thankful One
I, for one, am thankful for your SIL and wine (for you AND me) on this holiday. And this fic!! There’s so much going on in this chapter, but I’m going to try and mention all that I love.
I mean, how could I not mention that little movie moment or that, um, sangria-induced pit stop? Because those were steamy and saucy and lovely.
But my favorite thing in this chapter is how you showed their families being so different in ways that were equally enjoyable and uncomfortable. I mean, that’s the holidays with family, right?? I think you really did a great job of showing how Pam and Jim’s roots made them who they are (again, for better and worst).
The best was absolutely Jim’s moment of gratitude at the Beesly table. I mean... That was just lovely.
Thank you for this little treat on Thanksgiving. And thank your sister-in-law, too!
Author's Response:
I’m so glad that Jim’s speech worked! I didn’t want to make it too cheesy, so yay :)
I am not thankful for my SIL. She is evil. I’ll get her back at Christmas....
Date: November 22, 2018 04:23 pm Title: The Thankful One
This was a ton of fun. From the restrained formallity of Thanksgiving with Meemaw to the party that was the Halpert clan gathering. Like I said in a previous review, it's great to see that you're bringing out the characters in this story. Yes the smut is what draws one in, but once there the characters are the ones who add depth.
Happy Thanksgiving, hope you don't have to bad of a hangover.
Author's Response:
I’m glad that this smut fest can have an actual story line that connects with people. It makes me feel less heathen-like.
I also appreciate the hangover wishes. We all good. Now, for thanksgiving part two....
Date: November 01, 2018 03:56 pm Title: The One Where Pam Second Guesses Her Own Decision
Hope a new chapter comes out soon!!! Dying for this story.
1 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2018 07:44 pm Title: The One with the Big Fat Lie and the Jolly Green Giant
*swallows*
Well.
Remember how I said the last chapter was my favorite? Totally kidding.
Holy fuck, AG. *toasts you with a glass of holy water*
I LIKE Possessive Jim. Let's see more of him and less of Jealous Pam. Although, I'd say he um, effed the jealous right out of her.
How do you do it though? How do you go from searing sexiness for a couple of thousand words and move seamlessly into the last few paragraphs of sweet and lovely and ugh... I'm running out of adjectives to use to complement this story.
Please never end it.
Date: October 11, 2018 07:25 pm Title: The One with the Quiet Place Knock-Off
Who knew beets and Harry Potter would be such an irresistible combination that Pam wouldn't be able to keep her hands to herself?
I don't even know what to say about this one other than it's easily one of my favorite chapters of this story so far. Everything about it was perfect.
Date: October 11, 2018 07:12 pm Title: The One with the Honeymoon Stage Pt. 2
God, could they be any cuter?
Poor Pam, she must have been super exhausted to fall asleep on Jim that second time, but I'd say they definitely more than made up for it the next day.
As great as the sexy fun times were, the best parts of this chapter were Jim realizing how set in their relationship they were - the taking care of her comforter and getting her settled for sleep while she was already sleeping. He's the best.
Who am I kidding? They're the best. Especially your version of them.
1 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2018 09:34 am Title: The One with the Big Fat Lie and the Jolly Green Giant
Never ever stop writing this, and definitely don’t apologize! We all know what we’re here for ;D
Seriously though, amazing work! Can’t wait to keep following along.
1 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2018 12:09 pm Title: The One with the Big Fat Lie and the Jolly Green Giant
Awwwww
1 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2018 11:34 am Title: The One with the Quiet Place Knock-Off
Keep it coming. Glad to read the story will continue
Date: October 01, 2018 03:25 pm Title: The One Where Pam Second Guesses Her Own Decision
I really love writing about eating in romance stories (novels, fic, etc). Not in a creepy feeder-fetish way, but in a sweet, bonding, oh-my-God-we-burned-a-jillion-calories-now-let's-replenish kind of way.
This story is getting even awesomer than it was. I really like your style, it's obviously improving as time goes by.
P.S. I'm thinking about creating a dummy account to give you more than 5 jellybeans. And to any moderators who may be reading these words right now, I would totally never do such a shady, underhanded thing.
1 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2018 07:49 am Title: The One with the Big Fat Lie and the Jolly Green Giant
Don't you dare apologize! Beyond the all the sex are very real characters. The best relationships mean putting effort into them. That's what I've been seeing with this entire story. The sexiness is hot and steamy, but it's also a very real way of showing just how close a couple can become when they're truly intimate with each other. The way you've got things going here shows that sex can be used for more than just playful fun, it can be used to heal and unequivocally show the depths of commitment two people can have. Bravo on that.
1 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2018 04:02 pm Title: The One with the Quiet Place Knock-Off
Omg did I read that right? 12 more chapters please and thank you I love this story and I’m totally ok with it not ending tbh.
Author's Response: Ha! You did indeed. I have a problem. I am also okay with it not ending, too ;)
Date: September 24, 2018 04:04 am Title: The One with the Quiet Place Knock-Off
This is one of, if not the best, "pushing the beds together at the farm," stories I've read. Well done AG. With so much angst that there is in the early JAM relationship, it's always great to see that they truly are meant for each other. Fics like this one, even though it makes one want to drown in holy water like you said, do so that relationship. Keep it coming.
Author's Response: Aww, Warrior, you're making me blush!
1 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2018 07:42 pm Title: The One with the Quiet Place Knock-Off
Apologize. For. Nothing. That title is perfection and oh-so-applicable.
First of all, Money is one of my all-time favorite eps, so thank you for filling in where the episode couldn't.
I love how they start with a little flirtatious banter and Pam being all saucy and going for it. Go, Pam!
And then that was, well, perfectly written. Is it terrible that I briefly thought, "Hm? I wonder if Angela is loud? Will Dwight even know what THAT sounds like?"
Ah, and poor Jim is still probably a little insecure and wondering during inopportune times about Roy and Pam and...this aspect of their relationship. Thankfully that was fleeting.
And, I'm sorry, did you say TWELVE 12 t-w-e-l-v-e more chapters?!?! Okay, thank you I'm just going to die now.
Author's Response: Ha! Oh, DC, you are too kind. It does say 12, but let's be honest, there will probably be more than that. I have a problem. :X
Date: September 22, 2018 06:47 pm Title: The One Where They Have Sex Pt. 2
Omg, I LOVE this. I love the back and forth points of view. Doing it that way kept everything moving in a forward linear direction without having to backtrack for the other POV, I loved that. And beyond that... its hot as hell ofc (you're good at that, lol) but it was also so deeply, perfectly sweet I teared up at one point. It's absolutely how I've always imagined it would have been their first time.