Date: November 22, 2018 04:23 pm Title: The Thankful One
This was a ton of fun. From the restrained formallity of Thanksgiving with Meemaw to the party that was the Halpert clan gathering. Like I said in a previous review, it's great to see that you're bringing out the characters in this story. Yes the smut is what draws one in, but once there the characters are the ones who add depth.
Happy Thanksgiving, hope you don't have to bad of a hangover.
Author's Response:
I’m glad that this smut fest can have an actual story line that connects with people. It makes me feel less heathen-like.
I also appreciate the hangover wishes. We all good. Now, for thanksgiving part two....
Date: November 01, 2018 03:56 pm Title: The One Where Pam Second Guesses Her Own Decision
Hope a new chapter comes out soon!!! Dying for this story.
1 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2018 07:44 pm Title: The One with the Big Fat Lie and the Jolly Green Giant
*swallows*
Well.
Remember how I said the last chapter was my favorite? Totally kidding.
Holy fuck, AG. *toasts you with a glass of holy water*
I LIKE Possessive Jim. Let's see more of him and less of Jealous Pam. Although, I'd say he um, effed the jealous right out of her.
How do you do it though? How do you go from searing sexiness for a couple of thousand words and move seamlessly into the last few paragraphs of sweet and lovely and ugh... I'm running out of adjectives to use to complement this story.
Please never end it.
Date: October 11, 2018 07:25 pm Title: The One with the Quiet Place Knock-Off
Who knew beets and Harry Potter would be such an irresistible combination that Pam wouldn't be able to keep her hands to herself?
I don't even know what to say about this one other than it's easily one of my favorite chapters of this story so far. Everything about it was perfect.
Date: October 11, 2018 07:12 pm Title: The One with the Honeymoon Stage Pt. 2
God, could they be any cuter?
Poor Pam, she must have been super exhausted to fall asleep on Jim that second time, but I'd say they definitely more than made up for it the next day.
As great as the sexy fun times were, the best parts of this chapter were Jim realizing how set in their relationship they were - the taking care of her comforter and getting her settled for sleep while she was already sleeping. He's the best.
Who am I kidding? They're the best. Especially your version of them.
1 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2018 09:34 am Title: The One with the Big Fat Lie and the Jolly Green Giant
Never ever stop writing this, and definitely don’t apologize! We all know what we’re here for ;D
Seriously though, amazing work! Can’t wait to keep following along.
1 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2018 12:09 pm Title: The One with the Big Fat Lie and the Jolly Green Giant
Awwwww
1 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2018 11:34 am Title: The One with the Quiet Place Knock-Off
Keep it coming. Glad to read the story will continue
Date: October 01, 2018 03:25 pm Title: The One Where Pam Second Guesses Her Own Decision
I really love writing about eating in romance stories (novels, fic, etc). Not in a creepy feeder-fetish way, but in a sweet, bonding, oh-my-God-we-burned-a-jillion-calories-now-let's-replenish kind of way.
This story is getting even awesomer than it was. I really like your style, it's obviously improving as time goes by.
P.S. I'm thinking about creating a dummy account to give you more than 5 jellybeans. And to any moderators who may be reading these words right now, I would totally never do such a shady, underhanded thing.
1 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2018 07:49 am Title: The One with the Big Fat Lie and the Jolly Green Giant
Don't you dare apologize! Beyond the all the sex are very real characters. The best relationships mean putting effort into them. That's what I've been seeing with this entire story. The sexiness is hot and steamy, but it's also a very real way of showing just how close a couple can become when they're truly intimate with each other. The way you've got things going here shows that sex can be used for more than just playful fun, it can be used to heal and unequivocally show the depths of commitment two people can have. Bravo on that.
1 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2018 04:02 pm Title: The One with the Quiet Place Knock-Off
Omg did I read that right? 12 more chapters please and thank you I love this story and I’m totally ok with it not ending tbh.
Author's Response: Ha! You did indeed. I have a problem. I am also okay with it not ending, too ;)
Date: September 24, 2018 04:04 am Title: The One with the Quiet Place Knock-Off
This is one of, if not the best, "pushing the beds together at the farm," stories I've read. Well done AG. With so much angst that there is in the early JAM relationship, it's always great to see that they truly are meant for each other. Fics like this one, even though it makes one want to drown in holy water like you said, do so that relationship. Keep it coming.
Author's Response: Aww, Warrior, you're making me blush!
1 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2018 07:42 pm Title: The One with the Quiet Place Knock-Off
Apologize. For. Nothing. That title is perfection and oh-so-applicable.
First of all, Money is one of my all-time favorite eps, so thank you for filling in where the episode couldn't.
I love how they start with a little flirtatious banter and Pam being all saucy and going for it. Go, Pam!
And then that was, well, perfectly written. Is it terrible that I briefly thought, "Hm? I wonder if Angela is loud? Will Dwight even know what THAT sounds like?"
Ah, and poor Jim is still probably a little insecure and wondering during inopportune times about Roy and Pam and...this aspect of their relationship. Thankfully that was fleeting.
And, I'm sorry, did you say TWELVE 12 t-w-e-l-v-e more chapters?!?! Okay, thank you I'm just going to die now.
Author's Response: Ha! Oh, DC, you are too kind. It does say 12, but let's be honest, there will probably be more than that. I have a problem. :X
Date: September 22, 2018 06:47 pm Title: The One Where They Have Sex Pt. 2
Omg, I LOVE this. I love the back and forth points of view. Doing it that way kept everything moving in a forward linear direction without having to backtrack for the other POV, I loved that. And beyond that... its hot as hell ofc (you're good at that, lol) but it was also so deeply, perfectly sweet I teared up at one point. It's absolutely how I've always imagined it would have been their first time.
1 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2018 03:46 pm Title: The One Where Pam Second Guesses Her Own Decision
I think I’m going on round 4 or 5 with re-reading this story. *fans self*
It’s sooo good. Dialogue on point, descriptions flow without being too long winded. Makes me love our lovers that much more.
Amazing work.
1 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2018 08:03 pm Title: The One with the Honeymoon Stage Pt. 2
I love everything about this chapter. As I reread, I kept thinking "Oh, this part is my favorite," but then there would be the next scene and THAT was my favorite. Okay, a few highlights for me:
When he walks in and sees her passed out so he changes her, washes her comforter, etc.
Her falling asleep mid-coitus was fantastic, but especially 1) Jim's reaction AND 2) HOW Jim knows she's fallen asleep.
And that shower scene was something else. Aye aye aye.
How do you write smut so perfectly AND romantic???
Author's Response: Omg. Please stop flattering me. It's bad for my ego (but it does make me write more so...)
1 [Report This]Date: August 19, 2018 06:43 pm Title: The One with the Honeymoon Stage Pt. 2
I love how you've got them so very sweet together. Ah young love. This story has become like a fine wine, it's only getting better with age. We're past exploring the vintage to see if it's a good year or not. Finding it to be of exceptional quality the case has been bought and laid in the cellar to rest and mature. As each bottle is brought forth in time the notes that were there in the first tasting continue to entrance, while the newer notes that can only be brought about with time are being detected in the tasting. Salud.
Author's Response: I'm not sure what to make of the fact that your review is more elegant than half of my entire story, but thank you so much. Now I want wine.
Date: August 14, 2018 04:12 am Title: The One with the Honeymoon Stage Pt. 1
Wow! You've really got those two insatiable for each other don't you? Making up for lost time I suppose. Still all very hot and sexy even if not as graphic as before. Always a treat to see a new update on this one.
Author's Response: I mean, are they *not* insatiable for one another anyway? ;)
1 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2018 06:28 pm Title: The One Where They Have Sex Pt. 2
Once you get the hang of bouncing between the two POV's I think it worked well. Saves having line breaks to switch POV's or having to write two chapters for each one. That said wonderfully detailed and descriptive. Lots of good internal thoughts that made it all so very sweet and sensual. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: I'm glad it eventually worked, ha. I figured since I've been generally bouncing between them, with the occasional third person thrown in, we'd want to hear from both of them on their first--erm, second--time. Thanks for sticking with me! :)
1 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2018 12:32 am Title: The One Where They Have Sex Pt. 1
Yaaaaaaas can't wait 'till part 2 😜
Date: July 24, 2018 07:25 pm Title: The One Where They Have Sex Pt. 1
9 minutes. *giggles*
Listen, I think we can all agree that Taco Bell is a magical place where wonderful things can happen. And the image of Jim folded into the backseat of a Saab is pretty dang magical.
Add Jim's "I'll wait as long as you need me to" speech to the top of his Greatest Hits as a Boyfriend list because everything he said here is swoon-worthy.
Author's Response:
I was going to make it 7 but figured I'd give them the benefit of the doubt.
But yeah. Something about making their first time all magical and sh*t didn't seem right. I had to throw in a curveball.
I think we just need to keep a running tab of "Jim Halpert's Greatest Hits as a Boyfriend," honestly.
Taco Bell is magical under the right circumstances. Like when cheese is involved.
1 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2018 08:31 pm Title: The One Where They Have Sex Pt. 1
Man, oh, man. THIS story. THESE two. I need a cold glass of water after reading each chapter. :)
Author's Response:
:)
That was kind of the point of this being an entire chronicle of smut XD I'm glad you like it!
Date: July 22, 2018 02:57 pm Title: The One Where They Have Sex Pt. 1
Sexy, sweet, sensual, loving, pick your adjective. Excellently written. Looking forward to seeing what else these two get up to. ;)
Date: July 05, 2018 07:19 pm Title: The One That Sounds Like Freshman Year English Class
Well, this whole 'taking things slow' thing they've got going on has gotten them into quite the sticky situation.
Please don't ever stop writing this. It's too good. We're all going to hell anyways, you'll be in good company.
Date: July 03, 2018 02:40 pm Title: The One That Sounds Like Freshman Year English Class
Is you or them that are going to be burning up here soon? I can't help but feel that you've got something long and hard planned to build up to the climax of this story and beyond. ;) Sorry, couldn't resist.
Anyway, adding my own two cents in, out in the woods just off a public hiking trail behind some bushes.