Date: March 25, 2023 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
So well done!
Date: December 05, 2020 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww, man. The last line of this is just gorgeous. Great work.
Date: December 05, 2019 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this. It's so simple, and yet so heart-achingly beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks Dernhelm! And thanks for taking the time to review, hugely appreciated 😊
Date: October 05, 2019 07:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Very poetic. I'm glad to see some of the older challenges getting attention! Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks Comfect! It’s been fun reading through some of the challenges - there’s so much great stuff out there.
Date: October 05, 2019 07:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Excellent! And also everything warrior said. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks Sprinkles! Much appreciated.
Date: October 04, 2019 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jenna, wow! I was not expecting that ending. This has such great emotional depth for so few words. Masterful use of economy. Bravo. All the angsty hopeful beats all wrapped up in such a neat package. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks Warrior! It was fun to experiment with the genre a little, I’m glad it came across well.