1 [Report This]Date: January 14, 2020 05:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww! I like the creative use of events from later with circumstances from earlier. Good idea! And the execution is good too, especially the mix in Pam of rulebreaking and nerves. Good work.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like how I'm putting this together. I hope you continue to enjoy this fic. Chapter 2 is up now; I'd love to hear what you think.
1 [Report This]Date: January 14, 2020 02:32 am Title: Chapter 1
I feel so much compassion for Pam. Poor girl, she deserves better than a dull life with Roy (but, to be honest, I feel sorry for sick Roy and his mom as well).
And, of course, it's lovely to see how Jim adds a little adventure in her life — looking forward to seeing how he feels about their trip!
Author's Response: Yes, there's nothing simple about this love triangle, for sure. Roy can be likeable, and pitiful, but the heart wants what the heart wants. Thanks for the review. I just posted chapter 2!
Author's Response: Yes, there's nothing simple about this love triangle, for sure. Roy can be likeable, and pitiful, but the heart wants what the heart wants. Thanks for the review. I just posted chapter 2!
Date: January 13, 2020 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, I LOVE this premise! Hoping for a long, angsty road trip! Keep it going, awesome job so far!
Author's Response: Thank you! And you'd better buckle up: ANGST AHEAD. Chapter 2 is up now :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2020 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great setup so far. I like how you're getting into her head and also having her speak out her feelings to Jim like that. It's a good balance. Also of course good on Pam for taking this chance. Roy would absolutly be suspicious of this if he knew what was going on. Really looking forward to seeing how this all plays out.
Author's Response: So glad you like this so far! I know it's going to be tough to handle all the conflicting emotions coming up. Hope you stick around to see what happens. Thanks so much for the review. Ch. 2 is up now!
1 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2020 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love your premise- so cute! And this is my absolute favorite part.... the Jim smile:
“His it’s gonna be all right, Beesly smile that always cheered her up, always gave her that shot of hope she needed to get through whatever tough thing she was going through.”
I can’t wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And I love that Jim smile too :) Please check out ch 2!
1 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2020 10:37 am Title: Chapter 1
I like the premise, and your writing is great! Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 2 is up now!