Date: March 15, 2020 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
I don't hate you. I'm not a fan of this Karen right now. Kinda figured no one would be getting out of this cleanly. Lies on top of lies on top of lies. So everything gets more complicated. At this point it might Andy who puts on the big boy pants and is the first one to be totally honest. Wouldn't that be a kick in the head?
Author's Response: Lol. See the note I just left you at the end of chapter 4. Karen could be a little bitchy on the show, though, so I just ran with that a little. Thanks for the awesome review.
1 [Report This]Date: March 15, 2020 10:45 am Title: Chapter 4
The plot thickens!!!
Author's Response: Yup :) I just posted chapter 4, so hopefully the plot stays thick enough for your liking. Thanks for reviewing!
1 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2020 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh yay! I’m so glad their double “date” worked out this way. I love a story where Pam and Jim actually communicate with one another!
Date: March 10, 2020 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just binged the first three chapters. This is AWESOME! I can’t say it would be totally out of character for Pam to prank Jim. She has come up with a few pranks on her own so I can see her wanting to keep a connection going via prank.
And I can for sure see Jim finally snapping seeing Andy doing all the things he wants to do. I loved the confrontation and the confessions. So sweet! Looking forward to more even if it’s backlash from Karen and Andy. Great job!
1 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2020 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
That was nice. In my mind they traded and it's a win win win, but somehow I don't think that's where you're going with this.
1 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2020 08:34 am Title: Chapter 3
Glad they confronted each other. Nice to have them in the know about their feelings. Interested in what Andy and Karen might have to say... Especially Karen.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing chapters 2 and 3! Yes, there will definitely be more about Andy and Karen in the next chapter. I appreciate the awesome feedback.
1 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2020 08:09 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh my, this is such a great chapter! I love that they are honest with each other at last. It's sad that for this to happen, other people had to be involved (and probably hurt). Nevertheless, I root for them both and wish all the suffering will pay off.
Thank you!
1 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2020 07:31 am Title: Chapter 3
More Jim and Pam in a dark and deserted movie theatre, please!
But really I love how you’ve written the fact that it’s so easy for something to get out of hand when real feelings are involved, and how easy it is then for things to spill over and something huge to happen. It’s such a real thing and I have no problems picturing the two of them going through this! I’m looking forward to seeing how their new relationship is tested with the breakup and the dissolution of Pamdy amongst their coworkers.
Also, this line made me laugh out loud. So perfect! ““Man, that is so hot,” said Kevin from a table at the other end of the room.””
1 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2020 07:04 am Title: Chapter 3
I wasn't expecting this type of chapter today and I LOVE IT. Thanks for the bonus chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your last 2 reviews. I'm so glad you're enjoying this fic. Stay tuned :)
Date: March 10, 2020 05:18 am Title: Chapter 3
Kind of a different landmine there, but not wholly unexpected. They're finally being honest with not only each other but some more honesty with other people. Read Jim telling Karen he knows Pam is pranking him. Probably going to have to walk through a bit more fire before it's all said and done, but it at least appears that the worst is over, for now.
Author's Response: Thanks for your last two reviews! And yep, here comes the honesty. Definitely more fire to go through though--but Pam's pretty good at that :) More soon.
Date: March 08, 2020 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well, that’s a bit of a twist. A prank on a prank. How fun. Poor Pam, I feel like her tolerance for Andy’s over the top antics would never last the week. Lucky the double date isn’t too far away...
Date: March 08, 2020 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
I. Love. This. So. Much. The tension! The suspense of what will happen next! The lengths I just know they’ll both go to! So great. Can’t wait to read more!
1 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2020 11:46 am Title: Chapter 2
Fun! Fun! Fun! I love Jim and Pam BSing each other. Can’t wait for more
1 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2020 07:35 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm both excited and terrified of the new chapter. Excited, because it's fantastic and shows so many lovely details (like Dwight's meticulousness or Jim's arrival. And Toby. Oh, I love him, and he deserves so much better!)
But also I'm terrified because this whole thing just couldn't end well for everyone. Especially for Pam. Poor girl, she has to do something that she doesn't like just to get the attention the man she loves. And I feel sympathy for Karen here. Pam knows, Andy and Jim know, but she is absolutely oblivious.
Can't wait to see how the story goes!
1 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2020 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is so fun! It's angst without being angsty! I like the little bits we get to see of some of the supporting characters, like Phyllis and Toby.
I always wished that Pam would do something like this to get Jim's attention. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I do enjoy throwing in the supporting characters too. I never thought I'd enjoy writing for Andy, but it's been really fun. I hope you continue to enjoy this fic. Chapter 3 is up now!
1 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2020 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh boy. Fighting fire with fire is a dangerous game indeed. It's a good thing that I too like to live dangerously. For Pam's sake I hope Jim calls the bluff before things get out of control.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your feedback on chapter 2. Hope you continue to enjoy the "danger." I posted chapter 3 today--hope you get the chance to read it soon.
1 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2020 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Interesting way to take all this. Jim's reaction at the outset was spot on. That was one huge bomb Pam landed on him. However what I did like is that Jim was able to figure out what's going on rather quickly. From where I sit it's a nice way to show that they do still have a nice connection.
Andy's laying it on more than a little thick though. Especially when he's doing things she specifically told him not to do. Now I get that Andy is over the top and all, but that just left an odd sense that while he's willing to go along with the whole thing, he won't respect her enough to not do things she's not comfortable with.
Could quite probably be one of those landmines I mentioned last chapter. Another one is the whole double date thing. I get the feeling that eventually this is all going to blow up in everyone's faces.
Oh Jim and Pam why can't you just be honest with each other?
1 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2020 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh I like the setup of both of them pranking each other but boy howdy will this blow up in Jim's face. Hello Karen...
1 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2020 04:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, wow! I like the idea very much. I'm worried that this plan might backfire for Pam (or for Jim, or Andy, or all of them), but I'm waiting for the next chapter to see how it'll go!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy what I have planned for everyone. Chapter 2 is up now.
1 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2020 02:06 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a super fun premise! I liked Pam’s way of convincing Andy to go with it, it felt very true to his character. I can only imagine how delightfully chaotic this all will be...
Author's Response: So glad you are with me on this. I hope you like where I take it. Please check out chapter 2.
1 [Report This]Date: March 01, 2020 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh I'm very much here for this. It's a great kind of AU; taking a prompt from the show that didn't get picked up and running with it. Excited to see where Pam goes.
Author's Response: So glad you're with me on this. You'll have to check out chapter 2 :)
1 [Report This]Date: March 01, 2020 09:45 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm a fan of this new twist to the Pam/Jim story. It doesn't seem too far off from what Pam might have done. Can't wait to see what's coming next!
Author's Response: Hey, cool! Thanks so much. I just posted chapter 2 :)
Date: March 01, 2020 06:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting concept to be sure. I do like that Pam's straight with Andy from the start and getting him as a co-conspirator rather than leading him on or anything like that. She is a kind soul and that fits her well. I don't think it's to big a leap that she would go for this kind of revenge. There is a deleted scene where she in fact does sick Andy on Jim just the way Jim sicked Andy on her. This feels similar just in a different direction.
Good job though getting into Jim's conflicting emotions at the end there though. There could be landmines ahead though. Still I'm curious to see how this pans out.
Author's Response: I'm glad you didn't think this was too far out there. Thanks for giving it a chance and for your awesome support. Chapter 2 is up now!
Date: February 29, 2020 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, all aboard the crazy train it seems friends. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking a chance! Hopefully it's not as crazy as it seems at first, lol. Chapter 2 is up now!
Date: February 29, 2020 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh poor Jim, and please Andy know it’s a prank don’t fall to much for Pam though no one can blame him if he does. I really like the idea of Pam’s love for Jim pushing her into this prank more than Jim had anticipated.
Please get Jim and Pam together I love those two so much.
Author's Response: Thank you, and please know, that my stories ALWAYS have a happy ending.