1 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2022 03:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow , so good ! I imagined her calling him after meeting Karen too. Lovely and him driving over to her d84;a039; Lovely !
1 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2021 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
HE.
DROVE.
TO.
NASHUA.
I adore this.
1 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2020 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Well I just loved this!
1 [Report This]Date: March 31, 2020 05:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw! This was so sweet. I really liked it. I always love hearing from Pam about now she feels about Jim and where their life is, since she isn’t usually a “huge declaration” person. You wrote it really well. Great job!
1 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2020 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so sweet! I was smiling so much towards the end. I really love your prompt ideas for writing your stories. I think that really adds something special to them. Great work!
1 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2020 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was super sweet! The perfect post ep. I’m going to tell myself that this is what actually happened after that episode. Their phone conversation felt very natural - I can totally see it going down just like that. And, to have Jim show up and surprise her, just because he can. So lovely.
1 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2020 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for the lovely story!
I've found many similarities between Jim/Pam ana Michael/Holly relationships, but I've never thought about that particular way Pam could relate to Michael. And now I wonder how I could miss that point and... wow.
It was an awesome journey, and I like how it ended :) Thank you once more!
Author's Response: I'm not sure if I realized the similarities the first time I watched that episode, either. It wasn't until I was marathoning it again that I caught it. I think it was a great moment in the show, though. Not only for Michael and Holly, but for Michael and Pam, and then if anything did happen off camera that was remotely close to what I wrote, Jim and Pam too lol. Thank you for the review, I'm glad you liked it!
1 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2020 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice edit there. It works well.
1 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2020 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was fun. I really like the conversation here. It shows that Jim and Pam are really doing their best to work on their relationship. Being honest with each other, trusting each other with their feelings, being the person the other one turns to for the big and small things. It's really good to see.
If there's one critique I might have it's to have Pam ask how Jim got her room number and have him explain how he sweet-talked the desk clerk. That way you can have it in the story rather than in an authors note. Kind of a small detail I know, but it was something I was wondering until I read your author's note at the end.
That being said it was super cute for Jim to show up and surprise her like that. Really fun to see. Also color me impressed with the amount of writing you're getting done too. Great to see all these fun stories of yours popping up.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll go ahead and try to edit it and add in how Jim got her room number. I'm also impressed with how much writing I'm doing, considering I haven't done any in years. Being stuck at home has it's benefits, I guess. Thank you so much for all your kind words!!