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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2020 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

The banter between them that accidentally gets serious feels VERY S2 JAM.

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2006 11:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Gosh, Pam can be so cruel sometimes!  I liked the way you captured their conversation-it seemed very them.   The image of them both sittin in their driveways in the dark talking to each other is just so sad & so sweet at the same time.

Reviewer: Rose Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2006 02:03 am Title: Chapter 1

This was lovely.

Thanks for the fic!

Reviewer: girl7 Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2006 10:04 am Title: Chapter 1

My god, this was gorgeous and painful.  Just beautiful - really, this is about the closest thing I've read to capturing that breathtaking 27 seconds of agony and hope and sheer....need.  Beautiful - glad it wouldn't leave you alone. 

Reviewer: Par5 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2006 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1

As you said bitterpill, like they (and we) didn't have enough angst last season! But this was so aching and there's longing there and regret and pain... and I wish it would all go away. Great job at creating a mood with so few words.

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2006 04:37 am Title: Chapter 1

I love that she started the convo knowing that he's immediately know who it was and that is was the continuation of their previous talk - very "them," makes me think of The Carpet vm (What's that word we made up...?).  Anyway, I enjoyed it, well=written, wonderful language choices. 

(Also, Geometry was my first C...how I hated that class!)

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2006 03:52 am Title: Chapter 1

I like how this starts with the phone ringing, then they're immediately mid-conversation. That kind of sums up their relationship at that point - almost like they were each others' ongoing internal dialogue. I liked the simplicity of this - raw and spare, yet it really conjured a poignant moment. If only Pam did (or could have admitted she did) know back then!

Reviewer: jandjsalmon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2006 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

OUCH! Great angst. I am SUCH a tooch-achey fluff lover.. but this was BRILLIANT!

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