Date: November 02, 2006 04:30 pm Title: Just Conversation
This was great! I love the timing of it. The switches between scenes works great.
Date: November 02, 2006 01:56 pm Title: Just Conversation
I'm confusled
Date: November 02, 2006 09:17 am Title: Just Conversation
Okay, so here's the thing about you: Your fics are like "The Office" of fan fiction in the sense that every time you post one (which is so not often enough), I just know it's going to be brilliant and that I'll love it - much like the show. I can always count on it to just knock my socks off.
Loved this - subtle, simple, but tied together beautifully at the end. I hope to god what happens on the show tonight is somehow close to this...
Date: November 02, 2006 07:20 am Title: Just Conversation
Ok, now I really can't wait for tonight! I know you said only minor spoilers, but tonight's is shaping up to be a great episode.
Date: November 02, 2006 07:17 am Title: Just Conversation
YAY! I would SO love it if this is how text messaging makes its way into this season!!!! And I like how you leave things open to interpretation here with the tempo & not spelling out exactly who says what. Nicely done :o)
Date: November 02, 2006 06:00 am Title: Just Conversation
Oh, I loved this. Great execution. I hope this happens tonight!!!!
Date: November 02, 2006 02:54 am Title: Just Conversation
Pretty darn close to perfection. I love how sparse the descriptions are, and there's just one or two lines that just give away the situation of the entire setting...mm, too much that I love about this to detail, but I did love the entire thing. And I love the title. And I love the last three bits of paragraphs and lines, those are just amazing. And:
“Guess we’ll have to raincheck on that kiss now.” - Oh, yeah. Until never, if possible. WOOHOO.
Date: November 01, 2006 11:44 pm Title: Just Conversation
Umm my heart stopped at the end. Thank you for that. I need this. Next episode. How many hours left? Great job, proudgirl.