1 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2021 11:28 pm Title: Fabric Softener
This was absolutely lovely.
1 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2020 03:29 am Title: Fabric Softener
Oh, I love this story! It's so nice to see the Halperts happy, and Pam's realization from the first part is precious.
'I look cute doing everything.' Totally agree!
Lovely work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2020 09:03 pm Title: Fabric Softener
I always loved this scene. Such a sweet way to follow up on it.
I like that their conversation continued off camera. I often forget that so much happened that way, and that their behavior was altered at times because they knew they were being watched.
Very sweet that they both remembered that moment and reenacted it together.
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2020 07:58 pm Title: Fabric Softener
Aww. Very very cute. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: You're welcome!
1 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2020 06:48 pm Title: Fabric Softener
Okay this is super cute. Nice to have some internal thoughts in the call back. It was a good day for both of them. One of the last ones they had for a while so it's good to remember those early sweet moments.
The flash forward with the kids was just all sorts of adorable. I can totally see Jim and Pam being the kind of parents to gross out their young kids like that. Also Pam's admission and their banter was special to read too. Very nice little one shot.
Author's Response: Yeah, true! Thank you for the review.
1 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2020 03:42 pm Title: Fabric Softener
Very cute, that had me smiling almost the entire time.
Author's Response: Thank you!
1 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2020 03:39 pm Title: Fabric Softener
Cute little slice of life moment! They made a sweet picture, fabric softener shopping as a family. 😊
Author's Response: I know right!