Date: July 06, 2020 09:42 am Title: Casino Night
Writing that packs a punch to be sure. Great way to have Pam have her "come out of the fog" moment there as she walks into the house with Roy. Lots of spinning feelings screaming around till she realizes she's not the girl she was anymore.
The scene there at Jim's place seems just heartbreaking. She had the courage to leave Roy and tell that to Jim face to face before he leaves. then probably something even harder than leaving Roy, she lets Jim go too. I mean it hurts, but it also sets her up to be who she is for herself. Just Pam not 'Pam and Somebody.'
Like I said even if it's not the happiest thing to read, the writing is phenominal. Looking forward to seeing where we go from here.
Author's Response: You are spot on with your analysis and yes, there has to be growth before she can get the where she needs to be. Thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: July 06, 2020 09:41 am Title: Casino Night
I have a lump in my throat right now because it so painful but at the same time I see clearly why Pam felt this way and why she said that she said, and it's so, so real, and that's why it's aching so much, and I'm babbling right now, and god, I hope you have the second chapter half-written somewhere!
Beautiful work!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you Dernhelm. I don't know why I'm drawn to the angst but here we are. 😂Thank you for the lovely review, as always.
1 [Report This]Date: July 06, 2020 09:21 am Title: Casino Night
Ugh, PAM. Noo! This was wonderful to read, but now I just want to yell at her.
Author's Response: I know. I feel the same way but the payoff will be that much better. Thanks, Beth!