1 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2020 12:15 am Title: Bathtub Arguments
The description in this is very strong - you really do a good job of letting us see what's happening in this deeply awkward moment for them.
1 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2020 11:33 pm Title: Bathtub Arguments
I like this story for its coziness and comfort. It's endearing to watch that Pam and Jim, even in the most unpleasant moments, could communicate and find solace in each other.
Thank you for this story!
1 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2020 08:27 pm Title: Bathtub Arguments
This was lovely. Truly.
It’s such an awkward moment. I love this aftermath, of Pam feeling violated and disappointment in Jim’s measured reaction. I like that they were able to calm each other and talk it through. Pam calling out Jim and his response both felt true to character. Really nice writing. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I always thought Pam had a lot on her mind, seeing her expressions during and after Toby touched her. So I brought what I thought they were into light, and I’m glad you enjoyed it!
1 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2020 12:29 pm Title: Bathtub Arguments
Great one shot. That scene is always really awkward. Jim's right there and Toby still does that. Now I know there were a lot of times Jim touched Pam before they were together, but not when Roy was around and absolutly not in the way Toby did. So where I'm sitting it makes a ton of sense that Pam would have that kind of reaction.
It was a stressful day and you caputured those emotions really well. I really like that they can take the time to process things. They're communicating which has alwasy been a struggle. A bit heated at times, but the way everything calms down shows how deep their relationship is.
The images of them falling asleep like that though were wonderful. After all is said and done, it's in each other's arms that they're safe, warm, and loved. Bravo.
Author's Response: Thank you so so much! I’m so happy you enjoyed this, as I enjoyed writing it. I always wondered what happened after the whole Toby-touching-her thing. I always hate how mild Jim’s reactions on the show are.
Author's Response: Thank you so so much! I’m so happy you enjoyed this, as I enjoyed writing it. I always wondered what happened after the whole Toby-touching-her thing. I always hate how mild Jim’s reactions on the show are.