1 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2020 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh Jim. So hurt and confused and self-preserving.
Looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response: Self-preserving is such a good way to describe this Jim! Thanks for reading!
1 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2020 04:39 am Title: Chapter 1
It hurts. It hurts so much because you totally can relate to Pam in this situation when you feel so lonely, and every you attempt to change this state feels like banging at the wall with only hurt and no other result. And watching dear Pam so broken, and Jim so cold is painful beyond measure.
And yet, I like that Pam made these baby steps. There are so much kindness and honesty in them, and they make me fall in love with Pam even more.
You know me, I'll wait as much time as you need to write the continuation.
P.S. I feel sorry that your honeymoon had these angsty moments... and I hope that they didn't last long.
Author's Response: Oh Dernhelm, thank you! Don’t worry, my honeymoon was like 99% joy, but when you’re traveling for a month with anyone there’s bound to be an argument every now & then...
1 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2020 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhh this is so beautifully written, the pain is so palpable! I cannot imagine such a sullen Jim but you have described it so well that I have the image and I hate it.
I'm sooooo into this! All hail season 3 fixes
And you have articulated Pam's loneliness so well, of her not being somebody's number one. Ugh, heart goes out to season 3 Pam but I like she is tenacious here. Can't wait to see what you have in store!
Author's Response: Thank you! All hail season 3 fixes, indeed! Although, this isn’t the most traditional of fixes because I’m kind of making it worse before it gets better, but they’ll get there! I promise!
1 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2020 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
“Can I, uh, take a different plus one?”
This was the exact moment that I knew hated Jim in this story, and it did not improve as it went on. I mean, "“What?” He doesn’t open the door, just throws a curt reply in her general direction. Is this really what they’ve become? He can’t even bear to be in the same room as her?"?? I wanted to kill him. He's such a jerk and for no good reason (we're just gonna ignore the whole heartbreak thing for now). However, I kind of love it because now I can't wait to see how you turn this all around and fix it up. I hope you update soon!!
Author's Response: Oh I love this review so very much! He’s sort of the worst version of Jim here (which is kind of fun to write...)
1 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2020 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I hope the next chapter comes soon! Looking forward to seeing how Jim softens!
Author's Response: It won’t be too long! Jim will soften - eventually!
Date: August 01, 2020 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
God, you’re killing me Jenna. I’m reading this in the car with someone else there and I don’t wanna really start crying in front of them.
Author's Response: I’m sorry? I promise it will end well!