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Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2021 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 19

That is a strong tea selection, well done Jim. I'm fully with Pam on the green tea here. (And aww to her thinking it tastes better than anything she's had just because he's made it for her). I really love your version of Jim through Pam's eyes, and the idea that she finds him doing things more attractive than just being pretty - that entire paragraph about her thinking his real beauty is in the joy in his eyes and his movements and his smile is so lovely. I'm also loving that they're both continuing to be very dorky and very cute, with Pam burning her mouth on the tea. This was a such a great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I write Pam falling in love the way by assuming sh d always looking further into Jim's soul than she expects to.

Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2021 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 18

Tea! And Jim running to get the tea! 😍 This was perfect. I'm also very glad that he got back before Pam could go down too far down the rabbit hole, ha. Dwight and Izzy are hilarious here (the image of him waving his arms like he's trying to spook a turkey is brilliant), and I love the little reveal that his ancestors maybe might have been on the wrong side of the war...

Author's Response: Dwight should always embarrass himself while mentioning his ancestors without realizing he is: this was how I chose to do that ;)

Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2021 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 17

I really enjoyed Jim's thought process throughout this, his instant assumption that Pam's rejecting him and then him getting totally thrown by the realisation that she might not be, lol. And I like him noticing that she's careful with her words. Also this line, which just feels so them: 'Well of course she was stressed! He was stressed too! It was a stressful situation! He was—apparently they were—being put on the spot!' I love them mutually bonding over their inability to face things head on (thanks Izzy). And YES the tea! This was the perfect line from him.

Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted the tea to show up at a narratively convincing point :)

Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2021 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 16

Haha, I love Pam's reaction to Izzy (I think my particular favourite is paper cuts from Michael's novelty bookmarks, because of course Michael has novelty bookmarks with no books, although being pummelled to death by sugar packets is a close second). But Jim actually answers her! I love, love that his immediate reaction to pick up on Pam's discomfort and for that to be his first concern. Also this description of Jim is so perfect: 'he’s…still, in a way that Jim is rarely still. He’s almost always moving in some way, rocking to the beat of a song only he can hear or moving fluidly between the stations behind the counter since he seems to be the only real employee here and so does all the work.'

Ok I'm also really really glad Pam did say all of that out loud (honesty is definitely a good quality Pam) - onto the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! Making Pam be honest always at this stage requires it to be accidental (this ain't Beach Games Pam) but it's still really vital I think to her growth.

Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2021 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 15

Their banter is this chapter is so good, and so cute: as is Jim finally looking at Pam properly and her reaction to him (in fact to everything in this chapter, I love that she keeps getting lost in noticing things about him). And Jim guesses her major! And the Dwizzy(?) in the background is excellent. Ooh Izzy...

Author's Response: Yay! I got the banter right! And yes, Pam losing herself in observing Jim is one point of this fic: so often canon gives us the opposite so this seemed important.

Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2021 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 14

Gah I love Jim and Pam's individual spirals, and the way they're both doubting and secretly hopeful - they really are perfect for each other/on exactly the same wave length without realising it. This line is also very Jim: 'If she doesn’t lead, he’ll just…stay. In stasis. There are worse places to be than across a counter from her—even if she can’t look at him if he sits down at the same table.' And Michael's failure at organising stock cracked me up, hee, that is exactly the sort of thing I could see him confusing.

Author's Response: Thank you! I try to keep them on the same wavelength while having their unique points of view, so I'm really glad that's coming across!

Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2021 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 13

I didn't realise quite how behind I'd got on this 😱 But I'm v excited that this means lots of chapters to read! I love Izzy in this (Pam ending up wearing the beet juice coffee is also very funny), and I love the way you've written Pam's excitement/slight freak out over the idea that Jim might like her. Can't wait for Jim's POV!

Author's Response: I'm delighted to have so many reviews to respond to! I'm glad you found the expression of Pam's freak out good! I am always a little worried when I write that sort of thing.

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2021 08:05 am Title: Chapter 22

Aww, such a lovely chapter! I might be a prude because I found that... um... isn't it a bit too early for supply closet's thought? but leaving a number on the inside of the cup's sleeve is the cutest thing, and I'm here for all the cute and touching!
Also, it's awesome that Pam decided to change her place into... her place? and I'm very curious about what she is going to do about it.
Thank you!

Author's Response: Having the thoughts and acting on them are quite different! She's definitely nowhere near acting on them. We'll spend some time with redecorator Pam soon :) 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2021 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 22

This was fun. Kind of a nice break from how everything's been going on the last few chapters. In that it's good in that it gives Pam some time to reflect. She's a much different person now than she was in the beforetimes as you put it. Feels like she's coming to grips with that and is happy with it. the nod to her canon watercolor paintings was nice. As was building on those to show she's progressing with her artistic side rather than staying in one place. I really liked how you brought that in.


Of course it feel like the reason she is able to be happy about where she's at right is due in large part to a certain barista. Which is wonderful to read mind you. Jim putting his number on the cup sleeve like that is adorable. Really lovely that he can still make her smile like that.

As always looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm doing my best to keep this Pam at least canon-adjacent in her art even though she's obviously living a more artistic life/freelance job than canon Pam would. I'm glad it's still feeling like her!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2021 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 22

Okay, good to know Izzy has limits. And that those limits do not extend to not roping in Pam's mother. This is a very believable pair of opposites-attract best friends here.

Jim's coffee sleeve trick was very Jim and highly adorable. And after a lot of lightness, I'm glad you brought this back to how this is fitting into the broader arc of our recently unbetrothed graphic designer's life. She's still very much finding herself as she's finding Jim... and that may be problematic down the line.

Author's Response:

Izzy's limits are idiosyncratic, like her taste in men ;)

Thank you! This is ultimately a fluffy fic so don't expect too many problems, but there will be a fair amount of self-discovery along the way!

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2021 05:48 am Title: Chapter 21

I have a very stressful day, but your story made me laugh, so thank you!
Also, I hope there will be more shirtless episodes in the future... without Dwight around ;)

Author's Response: Glad to be of service! Hope the stress gets better. And Pam will definitely be thinking about this--and possibly reenacting it--in the future (though not the chapter I just posted, don't get your expectations up for that).

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2021 11:29 am Title: Chapter 21

I attempted to read this while brushing my teeth, which proved problematic given how much of it was genuine laugh-out-loud funny.

Pam's choice of love vs. sudden-onset stomach cancer, the description of Dwight's imitation, Pam accidentally getting Jim to boil himself, the Jim-Dwight banter about capitalism (which makes me deeply sad canon didn't get political), Dwight's failed complaints to the health department, Dwight failing to seduce Isabel with his lion comparison... this was just terrific from beginning to end. Really enjoyable entry.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it, my dear Author of the Month (congrats!). I really appreciate the feedback.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2021 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 21

This was just fun. Half point to you this time if you want it. I did cackle loudly while at work, but my partner was not in the cab.

Really kind of fun seeing JAM go up against Dwizzy here. I don't think a universe exists where Jim and Dwight don't bait each other like this and despite a few well placed shots from time to time, Jim always ends up coming out ahead in the end.

Dwight thinking he's a proud male lion and Izzy shutting that down with that wonderful no-nonsense line was just genius.

Same with Pam's own question about how much Jim's parents make. Pam always gets a few of her own shots in and that one was a bulls-eye.

Other than that her realization that yes she can openly flirt with Jim, it's not stomach cancer (which was the line that caused my mad cackle, well done you wordsmith with that one), and she can also make him laugh are delightful. If anyone has the look of a predator in their eyes I'm sure it was Pam when she saw Jim take off his shirt.

Wonderful as always.

Author's Response: Thank you for the half point ;). Pam will definitely be remembering that shirt removal in a chapter coming soon (though not the next one which I've already posted). Thanks as always for the careful review :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2021 04:56 am Title: Chapter 20

The commentary Jim puts in shows he paid pretty close attention in his classes. The "get your history right," line was just delightful. Banter, academic banter, Pam blushing, tea drinking, this chapter just has it all. I am curious to see who points out the obvious flaw in most of Marxist!Jim's reasonings. Jim is making his living abd producing goods and services for profit for the proletariat. My guess is that it'll be Dwight who somehow raises the issue. Probably by misquoting Marx with some line about the last capatalist will sell the rope with which they're hung.

Besides all that, it's really a lot of fun to see Jim and Pam bond like this. Great work as always.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am enjoying geeking out about communism, which was not where I thought this fic would go but I do not regret in the slightest ;)

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2021 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 20

Did not have "Marxist analysis of a tea sampler" on my JAM trope bingo card, but I'm glad you gifted us with this anyways.

No, but seriously, the humor in this chapter was right up my alley, and I'm glad Pam liked it too. "Stalin comes after Lenin who comes after Marx. Get your history right" definitely made me genuinely laugh out loud. And I love him identifying that the graphic design would bother Pam! A match made in heaven... or in Comedy Roasters.

Looking forward to more Dwizzy!

Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad to expand your JAM trope horizons ;)

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2021 03:05 am Title: Chapter 19

What a fantastic chapter! And with so much tea in it!!!
But! The tea didn't distract me from noticing things I'd like to comment on with excessive use of exclamation marks too. Like, this quote:
'watching him do things was more interesting than just watching him be pretty,' - I can't stress enough how much I love this line!!!!
Or her desire to paint him — oh, I hope so much she'll have an opportunity to do that!
Also, green tea. I can relate here to her willingness to like something (even if this something doesn't want to cooperate). Also, ouch. I like this little touch with her burnt — sometimes something very desirable might be a little too soon ;)
Thank you so much!! I hope to see soon how she tries other blends too :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! We're really leaning into the Bigelow teas right now for some reason I can't really explain, but I'm not going to stop ;)

 

And I'm really glad you're noticing these little bits! She will probably end up painting him--this story may end up pretty long though, so not sure when! 

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2021 12:34 am Title: Chapter 19

PAM GOT HER TEA!

First, I love your quasi-Marxist Jim calling out the colonialism of Plantation Mint. And I really appreciate Pam being able to see this gesture for what it is. This moment of her just looking at him because she knows she can? That's good stuff.

Ah, she is not smooth. I've been there with too hot tea, Pam. But she IS inspired, which feels like something she maybe needs in this moment.

Author's Response: TEA! I'm having a lot of fun with Marxist!Jim, so I just couldn't resist...

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2021 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 19

Just wonderful. I really like the fact that now that there is tea and confirmation that Jim is more than customer service interested in her, she takes a few moments to really take him in. It's almost like she's seeing him for the first time. That her mind goes right to artistic areas shows the positive impact he has on her. Just by her really looking at him, he's bringing out the best in her. Loved it.

Of course the delightful counterpoint is her almost burning herself with the hot tea. Sorry to say another point for me this time as I'm safely at home along and thus no one around to hear me laugh at your great line. Don't worry I'm sure you'll be able to make up the difference at some point.

So if feels like the start of something big here and I am 100% on board for it. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Danke schoen! I had a lot of fun with that one--and I guess it's on me for updating at a time I knew you weren't at work ;)

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2021 04:51 am Title: Chapter 18

Nice Dwight. You nailed his Dwightness.
Yeah tea. Darjeeling - must be Darjeeling!

Author's Response: If only Darjeeling were in the CVS variety pack! And thanks so much :)

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2021 04:47 am Title: Chapter 17

he’d do something stupid like go after her and kiss her, only to get rejected again, and have to face the reality that he was more of a jerk than he wanted to think. I see what you did here - nicely played Casino night reference.

Of course I was also hearing in my head the Sinatra and Sinatra song of the same title 'Something Stupid" so thanks for getting that stuck in there (I guess worse songs could be plaguing me so not all bad).

I'm late on the reading so I already know from notes there will be tea- yeah finally. 



Author's Response: Thank you! I like needling canon when I get the chance :)

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2021 07:13 am Title: Chapter 18

Firstly, awwww!
Secondly, — and I used Google to study the assortment! — Earl Grey.
But that's up to Pam, of course :)

Author's Response: Thank you! And good Googling :) She will drink the Earl Grey--among others ;)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2021 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 18

So many moons ago a certain someone I know was wondering if Dwight was going to appear as a German in a WWII fic. Sadly German Dwight did not come to pass. I mean the world needed to see Bomber Dwight demonstrate unarmed combat on himself after all. But I digress. If German Dwight was not to be here on the archive this Dwight being oddly proud of his grandpappy who served in the wehrmacht (hopefully the wehrmacht that is and not other double letter units in service at the time for the Germans) seems to fit the bill. Besides all that Dwight was wonderfully Dwight here. Right in to possibly defend someone being attacked and then offering unsolicited critique on the move.

Loved the line that before Pam could end up in Wonderland, Jim is back. It may not be their own house blend or anything like that, but I get the feeling this gesture will mean a whole lot more.

As for what kind of tea she would like? Well after a look around on the Bigelow website I have an idea. Should Pam offer Jim the choice, he is a barista and thus this is his area of expertise, I would say Jim might want to recommend the Elderberry tea. As you've so wonderfully laid out, Jim pays attention to Pam. He knows what she likes and what she doesn't. Her favorite things for example. Going by the packaging I'd say he'd suggest that. Even better as there doesn't appear to be an expiration date. Also is Pam going to confirm his guess as to her major in college? What with all the almost trips to Wonderland and computer re-starts we still don't have her answer to said question.

Always a treat and looking forward to more as ever.

Author's Response: Oh man, I still wish there had been some way for there to be two Dwights in your fic...but I am glad you like this oddly proud Dwight. And Elderberry would be great, if only CVS carried it ;). Thanks as ever for the thoughtful review.

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2021 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 18

Finally, tea!!! She should have something like Orange Pekoe or Jazmin. Can’t wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I agree that those would be better--but Bigelow doesn't put them in their variety packs because they suck ;)

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2021 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 18

Awwwwwwwww. Jim!!!!! You old softy. (Although this feels like a solution you could have come to quite some time ago.) Too cute.

Still enjoying the Dwisabel here... poor girl. She's smitten. And the Harry Potter reference was noted.

"How many kilopascals of pressure do you think you were applying?” He poked Pam’s arm. “Well, maybe just pascals.” is fantastic Dwight dialogue.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's not like coffeeshops usually go down the street to another store to buy their stuff...but yes, he probably could have slipped some into an order now that I mention it...

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2021 11:36 am Title: Chapter 17

Lots of good lines in this one: "the debate club singles night had ended up attracting way too many of the kind of guys who thought that “no” was not only not a complete sentence but the first step in a debate that they were going to win by sheer volume" is a solid description both of uncomfortable male behavior and of the kind of people a debate club singles night might be inclined to interest, and Jim's coding errors were a fun way to describe his thoughts here. The reference to his actions on Casino Night was great - sorry, Jim, but I'm pretty sure that you're right that that's something you might do. And I appreciate the note about Jim's befuddlement of Dwight's ability to attract women.

I'm on the edge of my seat about the tea.

Author's Response: There will be tea! I'm glad you liked the chapter :)

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