1 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2023 03:30 pm Title: Another Morning
Love how this mirrors Copper Strands and Treasures In The Sheets. But stages of Jim’s life considering with Pam.
Author's Response:
Had to follow-up on the heartbreak from Copper Strands -couldn't leave Jim in that state.
Thanks kindly for the review.
1 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2021 03:29 pm Title: Another Morning
This was so beautiful! I especially loved the copper strands and gold dust, and 'his smile returning' - you've created such a lovely moment with so few words 😍
Author's Response: thanks so much - 😍
1 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2021 07:00 pm Title: Another Morning
First off the cover art for this one is gorgeous.
After that, very much the feeling of a magic morning for the two of them. We saw several afternoon "golden hour" shots of Pam in the show where the light really highlighted her. This feels like a morning "golden hour." But it feels a lot more intimate than anything we saw in the DM parking lot or the sidewalk leading away from the office. Great job. I loved it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the mention of the cover art...honestly I'm not sure which part took longer, the words or the art (I created that dust beam) so nice to get a mention for it.
I know exactly what you mean with those golden hour shots and the equation to those is pretty much what I was going for but 'not for the camera'.
Thanks friend.
1 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2021 06:18 pm Title: Another Morning
I think you did well with this! Feels really easy to visualize Jim watching Pam bathed in dusty light... and very well described. And it's lovely seeing the circle close from Copper Strands - this time morning's coming at just the right time and she's going to be right next to him again. Very nice!
Author's Response:
Couldn't leave Jim in the state of CS- that was harsh. It's so much brighter with her in his life.
Thanks for a really lovely review on this and for in a small way making me think on doing a sequel (your part II to take your heart).
Thanks again.
1 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2021 10:24 am Title: Another Morning
Max, this was lovely! And such a great companion to Copper Strands, which may be my very favorite 55-word fic on the site. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you WW. I’m glad to give Jim a happier ending this time and glad you liked it.
Date: June 29, 2021 08:02 am Title: Another Morning
Such a beautifully intimate moment.
Author's Response: Thanks a86;a039;. Nice to hear.
1 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2021 07:42 am Title: Another Morning
Beautiful. Much said with few words.
Author's Response: Oh thank you. That’s the best compliment you could give to long winded me.
1 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2021 05:44 am Title: Another Morning
Oh, that's lovely! And very poetic imagery...
Author's Response:
Thanks Dernhelm.
I felt it was time to give Jim a happy ending after breaking his heart in Copper Strands