1 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2021 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw! I don't know how I missed this when you first posted it but I'm so glad I was scrolling through the recently posted and saw it! So cute. I love how everything got flipped-it felt really realistic and everyone's voice was spot on. Great job! I loved the angst and the payoff at the end. Beautiful!
1 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2021 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Michael is gonna end up officiating their wedding in this AU if you continued it, isn't he? I loved this. So good!
1 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2021 07:21 am Title: Chapter 1
If only Pam had been brave a few episodes earlier, UGH.
Thanks for this fix-it because I always cringe when she goes back to Roy.
*She heads towards the bar and recognizes the back of his head immediately. It’s basically all she’s looked at since he has come back.*
Ouch. This was a great observation.
Lovely work!
1 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2021 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I thought you did well here capturing Pam's feelings of insecurity about Karen, and how they're founded in Pam kinda liking Karen.
You also offer some good explanations for Roy's mysterious presence (made all the better because it means Dwight missed a real wedding crasher!) and Pam's refusal to take at least the first half of Kelly's advice. And the glimpse back to Jim experiencing Pam's dorky dance moves was lovely.
But I particularly enjoyed how you built the Michael scene. It really does not necessarily hold true to character that Michael never mentions their conversation in The Convention to Pam, and the build to the Booze Cruise moment from there all builds pretty naturally. And it sounds like canon Michael, which is always tricky.
Ah, those crazy kids. They just needed to be forced to talk and it all would've worked out fine. *sigh*
1 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2021 06:01 am Title: Chapter 1
I always love reading these 'what if' fics, except they (and especially this one) just make me wish that this is what had actually happened on the show. Pam really needed a rousing Michael speech in this episode! This was so great. I loved the addition of Pam remembering her previous dorky dancing with Jim, and him just matching her moves. Michael is wonderfully Michael throughout this. And then their exchange in the parking lot, and Jim's anger, and the hypothetically/actually conversation...ahhhh. And Jim showing up at the end! I loved all of this. Also, the final note of Pam letting Michael have a role in their wedding 😍
1 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2021 10:52 am Title: Chapter 1
This was great. Oh Micheal look at you go. In your own Micheal way you still take care of everyone. Despite all his bluster he really does care about everyone and that came out really well. That Roy crashed the wedding to try and win Pam back was really good. As was Pam just walking him out and that was it. Good job Pam. Then the discussion that she and Jim had was just perfect for where they are right then. Still hesitant and still afraid. However they finally have just enough courage to say what they need to say and it makes all the difference.
Loved Jim showing up at her apartment and kissing her breathless. Wonderful job with this one.
And the tag at the end with her enjoying her wedding planning with the knowledge that Jim will be involved with the planning was great. You can just see the glow coming off her right there. Beautiful.
1 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2021 09:11 am Title: Chapter 1
This oneshot has *such* a clever premise, aly! Why didn't we get a moment like this during season 3 to parallel Booze Cruise?! You nailed everything, from Pam's inner turmoil to Jim's reactions to Michael's hilarious and humbling words of advice. So so good.
1 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2021 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1
This was a fantastic read. The *only* comment I'd make from a personal perspective is that you might want to put more line breaks in as it's a bit of a physically "solid" read at times.
It was immersive and extremely well written and I really enjoyed it.
1 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2021 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww, Aly, that's so sweet! I love the Phyliss' Wedding fix-it so very much!
Thank you for sharing :)
1 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2021 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
So very good! The dialogue was spot on, I loved the huge shift in mood and emotion from start to finish.
1 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2021 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
IT'S. NOT. MOVING. ON. IF. YOU. WALK. BACKWARDS.
Ughhhhhh I love that line even if it hurts. Their tense conversation outside the church was just perfect and then he KISSES HER AND IT'S NOT HYPOTHETICAL AND SHE LEAVES.
This was so good! Happy birthday to me! :)
1 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2021 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
UGH! Aly this angsty-fluffy fic! Aw, this was amazing! Such a great s3 fix, I love it!