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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2020 02:47 pm Title: Part 2: Watercolors

Very fun to watch this scenario play out - it feels pretty underexplored.

Reviewer: madmen fanatic Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2012 11:59 pm Title: Part 2: Watercolors

I loved this. I always thought Pam should have moved to Stanford, her job in Scranton was terrible anyway. And it looks like Jim is advancing too. Awesome.

Reviewer: JAMonMyToast Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2009 07:21 pm Title: Part 2: Watercolors

Oddly sweet. It isn't a quick, easy ride on the love train filled with "I love yous" and cute babies. And I like that. Because Jim and Pam plus rough patches equals that couple I used to enjoy watching on TV.

Anywhoo... her not being happy made me happy, because this is sort of the type of thing that happened this season. So great.

And graduate school. HEE!

Reviewer: Semby Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2006 08:37 pm Title: Part 2: Watercolors

This was a lovely story. What I really, REALLY love is that you had Pam try out the internship, really give it a shot, and decide honestly and for the right reasons that it wasn't for her, and Jim totally supported her. That just... it felt so right.

Author's Response: I thought that was pretty realistic, so I'm glad you liked it too. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2006 04:49 pm Title: Part 2: Watercolors

what a great idea of how life could be for those two - Will there really be no more??

Author's Response: I thought about doing a Jim version, but I'm already working on another story for him. Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2006 04:11 pm Title: Part 2: Watercolors

Yes! This is so beautiful. I just wish that the show would catch up to this. I'm done with angst. Bring back the partners in crime and the sweetness! I think we should make a petition.

Sorry, I got ahead of myself here. I just wanted to say: Amazing, amazing, AMAZING job.



Author's Response: Thank you! And I agree, I miss the Jim and Pam that used to play tricks on Dwight. I'm looking forward to less awkwardness. 

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2006 03:56 pm Title: Part 2: Watercolors

So well-written! A real pleasure to read.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2006 03:43 pm Title: Part 2: Watercolors

That is the perfect ending for me!   They've started figuring out a direction in their lives; I think that is what we all hope to achieve by the time we reached our late 20s.  I like that they are so supportive of each other.  That is why they make a great couple!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for you lovely comments!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2006 02:35 pm Title: Part 1: Sketches

How did I not review this when you posted the first chapter???  I know I read it...

Anyway - can I make up for it now???  I love it.  I love them both trying something new and finding out they may not love it.  I love always thoughtful Jim being so freaked out he forgot her.  I just - in general - love them and also the way you write them.  Thank you. 



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you liked how things turned out.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2006 01:33 pm Title: Part 2: Watercolors

YAY!  I was dying for the next chapter after the scene at Chuck E. Cheese!  Nicely done.

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2006 01:26 pm Title: Part 2: Watercolors

Really sweet. I loved this.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2006 08:31 pm Title: Part 1: Sketches

I like fluffy too so I am looking forward to it any way you make it! :)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2006 03:25 pm Title: Part 1: Sketches

I really enjoy stories that make Jim and Pam both imperfect, unsure, and tentative with each other.  I can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope I can continue to do as well in the second part. It's looking pretty fluffy right now.

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2006 01:01 pm Title: Part 1: Sketches

EEEE, I love this! so angsty but sweet! It's good as a standalone, but I'm very glad to see the "tbc" at the bottom!!

Author's Response: Yaay! Thanks for reading, dear!

Reviewer: thursday Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2006 10:06 pm Title: Part 1: Sketches

yeah... tbc.

Reviewer: moofoot Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2006 07:05 pm Title: Part 1: Sketches

TBC? Are you telling me there may be possibilities of angst and heartache and pitiful!Roy? Because I don't think I can handle that.

But I'll be reading this anyway, because I'm a wimp like that. And I like reading things. =P

I loved their first kiss in the stairwell, and I think you chose the best line from this chapter for your summary, because I like how people describe the tiniest things. I mean, I like their other kisses too, obviously, but I like that first one the most. I like that Pam finally got t he guts do take a chance in life, and that is different from the Pam we see in the show, but this makes it more of a gradual understandable thing than a sudden unforeseen and completely out-of-character thing. The way you wrote it makes it seem like the change in character was basically inevitable, and I like it when stories have reasons. OK, enough of a rambley review: interesting premises, interesting beginnings, and I honestly can't wait to read more of this.



Author's Response:

Maybe not so much Roy in the second part, but we'll see.

Thanks so much for the comments! I'm really glad you liked that line about the paper bag. I just fell in love with the idea of him having that for some reason.  

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2006 04:51 pm Title: Part 1: Sketches

Kind of wish it happened that way but then I a fluff type person. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2006 04:50 pm Title: Part 1: Sketches

Love the skee ball reference!  And your take on the breakup and Moody!Jim!

Author's Response: Skee ball rocks! And for some reaso, I could just see everyone playing that on Michael's birthday. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2006 04:46 pm Title: Part 1: Sketches

i'm loving this so far! the characters are spot on, and omg jim and pam are so cute i wanna die. can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! You'll definitely get a bit more fluff at the beginning of the next chapter.

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2006 02:37 pm Title: Part 1: Sketches

Oooo. Who'da thunk that ROY would be the one to break it off? Great call.

And the kisses here are so sweet and fumbly and sexy. Love this. 



Author's Response: Hee. I'm glad you liked my little twist there. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: unfold Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2006 02:27 pm Title: Part 1: Sketches

This was really amazing. I love fics where Pam and Roy's split is sort of mutual and not so messy and tear filled. 

Author's Response: Thank you! I always have a hard time with Roy, so I'm glad to hear you liked the way it turned out. That's a big compliment coming from you. 

Reviewer: Jonah5 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2006 02:12 pm Title: Part 1: Sketches

This was great!  Loved all the characterizations especially Pam.  If only you wrote for the show.... :)

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