8 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2006 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, poor Pam. Sucks to settle for a Plan B like that when Plan A would have been so wonderful!
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2006 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this view of Fancy New Beesly. And, I just got it! What Pam had "hoped would happen that night"! *hits head*
I enjoyed this, Miss Willow.
8 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2006 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very funny Michael. I love when she drove him home.
Date: November 12, 2006 06:21 am Title: Chapter 1
It's even sadder with that backstory. Nice job!
Date: November 11, 2006 08:01 am Title: Chapter 1
I started reading this at LJ, realized I read it here too, and kept going anyway because I really liked it. Have to agree with Colette, the line about shaving her legs was so true!
One nitpick -- for phone numbers, the "555" should be the second set of numbers, not the area code. I could still technically call that number locally if I was bored and really drunk.
And you mentioned in LJ that your going to be studying creative writing. Keep it up -- you're definitely on the right track!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2006 07:27 am Title: Chapter 1
This captures Pam's tentativeness about reaching out to Jim, in spite of her fears about doing it. Perfect for her to come up with a silly excuse to see him and when he says 'no', I could really sense her disappointment. Very poignant.
Oh and - She shaved her legs Friday morning anyway -- just in case - what girl hasn't been there?
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: November 10, 2006 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
"but then her mind went back to the imaginary gorgeous blonde who liked to hover over the fax machine."
i love that line, it's so pam.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
9 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2006 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can't even imagine how disappointed Pam must've been that Plan A didn't happen...and after she shaved her legs and everything!
Author's Response: Yes, her Friday went from looking good... to looking Michael Scott in the face. Ick. hehe
9 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2006 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Pam! I feel so bad for her. It is so hard to try to make advances, no matter how oblique, and feel the other person backing away.
Author's Response: I felt bad for her in that episode because she seemed so hopeful about something. I hope the TV Jim doesn't reject her.