1 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2023 05:46 am Title: Mom Knows Best
I like Jim’s slip-up, “Dunder Muffin” reminds me of one of his talking heads.
Oh, Jim, you have no idea what you are about to walk into. You are about to meet the love of your life Jim!
(He parked next to Roy’s pick-up truck, didn't he!?)
Oops... Good thing he wouldn't need his lunch bag.
5… 4… 3… 2… 1… and Jam!
Aww… this is so sweet.
Author's Response:
Glad you caught that reference to his talking head! And yes, he did park next to Roy's truck!
Glad you liked it, thanks for the review!
1 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2022 02:08 am Title: Mom Knows Best
One of my favorite things in a fic is those tiny details and seeing those baby carrots just amused me so much.
Betsy is such an overbearing mom and it’s the cutest thing ever. I’m sure everyone who’s had first day jitters can relate to this.
Too bad he dropped his lunch, nothing a little trip to Cugino’s wouldn’t fix right?
This is so electrifying to read. I wish I didn’t have any jellybeans to give you because if I didn’t, I’d let Betsy Halpert give you a big ol hug.
Author's Response:
Ah thank you so much!!
I was conscious of trying to get some big details into such a short fic, so I'm really happy you picked up on ALL of them with the carrots and Cugino's.
Thank you for the reviews, ALL the beans and the hug. So very grateful!!
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2022 12:42 pm Title: Mom Knows Best
I love the foreshadowing! Delightful! We know where it all ended up, but I love seeing how it started.. and that Jim and felt the electricity that very moment…
Author's Response: Ah thank you so much!!
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2022 10:58 am Title: Mom Knows Best
This is DELIGHTFUL.
Author's Response: Why thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2022 09:18 am Title: Mom Knows Best
It’s so refreshing to see some pre-show Jam. Before the angst and heartache. I loved it as always. 💗
Author's Response: Ah thank you so much!!
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2022 06:26 am Title: Mom Knows Best
An extremely cute little drabble here. Betsy taking the chance to have one last time to send her son off into the world like it's the first day of school. Just one more time, for him to be her little boy, but then let me grow into the man she knows he is. Nice little call out to the start of Athleap too. And of course, he falls for Pam right away. Hold on to those feelings Jim. It may take a while, but they won't steer you wrong.
Author's Response: Ah thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2022 01:57 am Title: Mom Knows Best
I must’ve done a lot of terrible betaing to deserve this - quantity over quality?
Thank you very much
Author's Response: You are most welcome, you wonderful beta you