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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2008 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Return to the roof. I like it. Plus his long legs. I like those too.

I think that mud analogy is probably exactly what it felt like. Trying to keep moving, but barely able to move.

Jim brought bubbbles to work. So small, but so sweet. (Plus, I love bubbles. So win win)

Aww Pam. The two nights you wanted Jim to notice you - it does't go as planned. First casino night and then the merger. Aww...

(oh this is random also - but i am in love with your titles. always so great. simple and descriptive, but perfect)

"She knew now that she was in love with him" so perfect. gah. I mean, i love it, but I can't help but think how how disappointed she was.
(I think after this I may go rewatch some episodes. Because.... apparently I want more heartbreak ???)

holy crap, why couldn't think have happened. i was unable to look away from the page, i just wanted to read it all. and then my eyes started tearing up with happiness, ad wow, it was so sweet ad perfect and happy and gah!

Reviewer: lightbulb Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14, 2008 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww! Your endings are all great! It makes me want more... but, I know it's the perfect ending. :P

Yes, I am stalking your fics. Someone recommended you.. so I'm working thruogh your 7 million fics with great pleasure. And might I add: I'm loving it!

Author's Response: Listen, you are more than welcome to stalk my fics -- I'll even leave out milk and cookies for you!  :o)  Seriously, thanks so much for taking the time to review -- hope you enjoy the others!  :O)

Reviewer: McGigi Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2006 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love stories with happy endings, and I love when Pam grows a pair and puts herself on the line. Excellent work!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2006 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

I definitely vote for that ending instead of what they will give us.

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

So nice! I really enjoyed this.

I've read a lot of your stories here and I wanted to say that I really like them. I think I'm a little bit in love with Jonathan. I'm not really great with feedback, but I wanted to let you know there's someone out there reading and enjoying your work.

Cheers.



Author's Response: You are so sweet to say that - thank you!  Yours is on my list to read when I get a chance to catch up (which is looking like it'll be weeks from now, doggone it - real life gets in the way far too often).  Thanks again!

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thanks!!! I so needed that. ::sigh:: this show is killing me right now. Bring on the fluff and happily ever afters please! :-)

Author's Response: I will always bring on the fluff & happy endings (TWSS!) when I'm writing about these two, I promise.  :o) Or at least, I usually do....

Reviewer: Crystal Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. You really have the "voice" of both of them down well.

He nodded, glancing over at her before quickly turning his eyes away, as if looking at her took something valuable from him.
This is beautiful & will think it this week when I'm sure we'll see Jim do this!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: sharky Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yummy! Was the title a U2 reference?


Author's Response: Absolutely was! :o)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

I've been anxiously awaiting your take on the preview for The Merger, and I wasn't disapointed. Great job, and if only it were to go down like this. If only...

Author's Response: You are so sweet - thank you!  I'm glad I didn't disappoint.  I've been trying to stay away from the episodes themselves while the season is ongoing, but it's hard not to sometimes....

Reviewer: Willow Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is beautiful :)

Author's Response: Yay!  Thank you!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yea for angsty stories with happy endings.  Great job.

Author's Response: Yay for people who always give reviews - you rock!

Reviewer: Rebecca Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Whoo hoo! finally, great story!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it - thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 09:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh my goodness, I loved this story.  I so want Pam to finally just say what she's thinking.  I think that if she really opened her heart to him, he wouldn't have a choice except to let her in.  This was wonderful, and I loved that you really played on her hestitation and anxieties; it's very Pam.  Yea for happy endings.  

Author's Response: Thank you so much.  I don't think he'd be able to resist her either, personally. ...And he damned sure better not, either.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: janelle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 09:01 am Title: Chapter 1

thank you! that's just what i needed :)  i especially love that they blew bubbles together, and the sinking into the mud  feeling she got when he was gone.



Author's Response: The image of them blowing bubbles just came to me all of a sudden - seems like something they might do, you know?  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Thanks girl7...very therapeutic.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 07:51 am Title: Chapter 1

Girl7 --- from your lips (fingertips) to Greg Daniels' ears (eyes)!!!  Thank you for this lovely treat :o)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 06:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Mmmm, yummy angst with a side of happy ending.  That was nice, and probably a bit how it will work out.

Reviewer: Par5 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 06:13 am Title: Chapter 1

If only, girl7, if only... Thanks for trying to drive the angst out of my head!

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 05:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww, angsty with a sweet ending. Thanks for writing this.

Reviewer: Kath Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2006 05:00 am Title: Chapter 1

Just the sweetness we needed for the angst filled week of speculation we have ahead of us. Now let's hope that FNB is this forthcoming over the next few weeks.

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