10 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2006 03:36 pm Title: Eyes
You did a great job with this...your words made me ache for Jim, and then for Pam.
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2006 06:43 pm Title: Eyes
A pretty different style of writing and perspective but it's very well-written, it's got beautiful imagery and I can see it happening easily. And it's very in-character for something that's more abstract than usual, and that's brilliant. I love the way you've captured the setting and everything without going too much into detail.
Loved this. Great job!!
7 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2006 12:15 pm Title: Eyes
Very interesting perspective here. I don't usually get into a story that is based on a song I don't know because it evokes certain feelings in different people that are so disparate. In this case though, the story is about Pam dealing with the feelings she's been trying to avoid for so long which is something we can all relate to! I hope she finally is ready to understand. You have some nice images here - is this your first fic?