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Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2025 09:33 am Title: Chapter 3

Didn’t love Claire flirting with Jim, but I hate anyone who dare take him away from Pam 😂 glad she thought they were engaged though, and you can easily see why.
The dressing up was fun and loved the little Woody Lego too
I love how stupid you made Roy with the debit card PIN number and he likes ‘eating’
Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2025 03:24 am Title: Chapter 3

Lots of stuff to mull over here. Kind of fun to see them meeting some local ladies. Good for one of them taking a shine to Toby too. That was nice to see. Very fitting that Jim and Pam would be mistaken for being engaged. With their chemistry how could they not?

Loved their banter in the Lego store as well as World of Disney. I'm sure Jim would have been about gobsmacked seeing Pam in the dress you had in mind. I know Disney parks don't really allow adults to dress in costume. That's what their employees are for after all. However I do wonder if there might be some Disney-bounding antics to come..

However the big thing was that I think Pam was getting a little outside perspective. Seeing someone interested in Jim like that pulled on her heart more than she was ready for. Then the conversation they had after shopping was big too. Skirting around some issues for sure, but they're both thinking about some things. Nice way to bring that in.

Also, as a child of the Disney Renaissance, I will say that "The Lion King," is the best movie of that era. A retelling of Shakespeare accompanied by the music of Sir Elton John beats a chick with Stockholm Syndrome any day. Though there's not a pretty dress for Pam to try on from that movie, so I'll grant that one to "Beauty and the Beast."

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: grc73 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2025 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is entertaining. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2025 07:09 am Title: Chapter 2

Funny enough, magnets are what my wife and I get to remember vacations. Our fridge is full of them.

Lots of fun banter all over the place here. Jim being kind of wistfully happy with Pam. A little hint at her annoyance with Roy. It was interesting to see her banter with Jim about the whole peaked in high school thing. With Jim, it's a fun joke. I always took Roy to be the kind of peaked in high school and never grew past it kind of guy. Maybe that's why it's hitting with Pam. She lives with a guy who is actually like that. So to be able to tease about someone who isn't like that is fun for her.

More over the top antics from Michael of course. Makes sense Jim and Pam would do what they can to ditch them. Should be a lot of fun to see what kinds of adventures they all get into now that they're at the park.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2025 06:55 am Title: Chapter 1

This is very promising. Had Michael ever gotten the chance I'm sure he would have leapt at the opportunity to do something like this. Also getting Pam away from Roy just before she really starts planning the wedding could be all sorts of fun too. Probably a few speed bumps coming to be sure.

However they characters feel pretty spot on. Jim and Pam vibing. Michael being over the top. Dwight being Dwight. Looks good so far.

Welcome to posting on MTT! Always fun to get new writers.

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 23, 2025 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Super duper cute and everyone was spot on in character! Loved this and can’t wait for more in the most magical place on earth!!
Great first fic, congrats and welcome welcome!!

Reviewer: Graceface Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 23, 2025 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Congrats on your first fic on MTT! I'm happy more people posting and glad you're here! This is really well written and original, I can't wait to see where you take it! Post again soon x

Reviewer: maryc Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 23, 2025 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Such a creative idea, I love it!! Can’t wait to see where you take us on this journey! Get those next chapters posted quickly please!

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