10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 04:02 pm Title: Peach
Oh, yes. Oh, you are just fantastic. Will there be more to this? Because... just YES.
I'm really bad at expressing feelings in words, right? So I ought just say that I think your writing is superb, and that you do indeed capture the characters perfectly, and that a little part of me wants you to do nothing but write Office fic for the rest of your life. *g*
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for the lovely review. Do nothing but write Office fic? Sure sounds good to me!
9 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 12:40 pm Title: Peach
I enjoyed this greatly. The part where Jim covered his mike to tell her she was prettier than Katy? Just about broke my heart.
I hope there's more on the way!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. There's more!
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 12:22 pm Title: Peach
great little stories - where's the rest of the rainbow?? :-)
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 12:21 pm Title: Peach
WOW how much did this warm my heart!? LOVES it.
I like "leaving no room for misinterpretation". Ugh.
Author's Response: You warmed MY heart. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 11:42 am Title: Peach
These are so cool! I LOVE "unseen scenes" from past episodes, especially when they have the sexy touching and brushing and lips too close to each other that you've included.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yay for sexy touching!
8 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 11:36 am Title: Peach
The rack holding all his old man ties, as if they’ll make sense in the context of his room.
Nice :)
Author's Response: Hee!
8 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 11:35 am Title: White
Really like this one. A nice quiet moment, and her name slipping out? Yum.
Author's Response: Thank you!
8 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 11:33 am Title: Purple
Good point that she may have been as angry at Jim as at Roy in that moment!
Author's Response: I know! If my best friend just sat there like nothing was happening, I'd be cheesed off, too.
Date: November 27, 2006 10:31 am Title: White
he absentmindedly reprograms the numbers on Dwight’s speed dial.
LOL! This is SO JIM. I love it that he does this "absentmindedly".
Author's Response: Sometimes I think he harasses Dwight out of habit, rather than real interest. Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 07:32 am Title: Purple
Whew. Thank God I can uncross my fingers now. They were cramping a bit. ;)
This was lovely - in the same way your original story was. Sweet little moments that express why these two better get their acts together pronto. It's so annoying. LOL! Can't they see what we do???
SIGH. I loved them all but Purple struck a particular chord w/me. Eons ago this guy I was crazy about once whispered something similar in my ear and though it didn't end well - I've never forgotten how it made me feel. Thanks so much for the reminder and the early Christmas gift. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing and inspiring!
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 05:29 am Title: Peach
Lovely story! Chapter 2 was my favorite.
Author's Response: Thank you! I like that one, too. It's so nice and quiet.
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 05:04 am Title: Peach
Wow. I love ALL of these. And honestly, that moment in "Purple" where Jim covers his mic honestly made me go, "Holy shit," and gasp, because ... wow ... I've been there, and I really felt that moment in this story and in real life, and it was intense. That was ... awesome. Thanks for writing the sequel. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I actually felt nervous for Jim while I was writing that! Aren't I silly?
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 03:22 am Title: Peach
These are so lovely and delicate and finely detailed. I love the way each little moment is imbued with so much emotion, yet there's so much left unsaid. The ending of 'White' is particularly fine - the metaphor of them putting the birds away is subtle and perfect.
So many more colors left on the color wheel (hint, hint..)
Author's Response: Thank you, Colette.
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 02:49 am Title: Peach
I love this so much! There needs to be more! If you're up to it, that is. But seriously, this is some of the best characterised writing I have read in a LONG TIME. You've captured their gorgeous friendship so well, and every chapter makes my heart flutter so pleasantly. This is the Jim and Pam we all fell in love with... I can't wait to read what else you've got coming!
Author's Response:
More to it? Okay!
Thanks for the lovely review.
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 12:32 am Title: Peach
I want more of this so badly!!! Keep going! (And if you make it MA, I might just bare you some children.)
Author's Response: Thanks! Your wish is my command.