1 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2023 02:02 am Title: Chapter 1
A great representation of the barriers in Jim and Pam's friendship. Will be using this for ideas going forward. I would just advise rereading this to correct the dialogue punctuation. Great piece!
8 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Every good fic needs a supply closet scene! I really liked yours. But the image I liked the best was the one of Jim purposefully hitting his knee to avoir thinking of Pam naked.
Author's Response: Every fic does need a supply closet scene! I think that is one of my favorite scenes too I felt so bad for Jim writing it...
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. Thank you for writing it :)
Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you did!
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovely. I love all of these, but the last one is my favorite- very sexy.
Author's Response:
That last one is my favorite too. I'm also working on a supply closet fic right now...its actually my first mature content story featuring Jim and Pam so we'll see how that goes...I'm nervous!
9 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
How exciting! It's like I'm part of the Office fanfic community and everything. All of this was lovely, but I particularly liked the superheroes section. And I'm afraid that I have to agree with Dwight on this one - Superman is vastly inferior.
Well done!
Author's Response:
Lol I know I completely agree with Dwight. Superman can fly and nothing can kill him really. BORING. :) Thanks for the lovely inspiration!
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Eeek, that last one. WE NEED TO SEE THE SUPPLY CLOSET. This was great, and I enjoyed every bit of it. Oh, Jim and Pam... if anyone ever needed MORE to get it together! You captured them perfectly. Well done!
Author's Response: I would love to see Dwight actually look them in the supply close. It seriously would make my day. I think I'll have to write to Mindy Kaling and tell her to write an episode.
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
So good. I thought your characterizations were spot on.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! I've only recently started writing The Office fic, but I'm glad that I have been able to capture them correctly!
9 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Watching her blush and giggle while Roy says something inane and Jim wonders where the fuck her intelligence goes when Roy walks into the office."
Ouch. Kind of true, but I must admit I was annoyed at Jim for thinking that. I mean, God. Very bitter.
I loved this, and the idea of Jim smacking his knee on purpose, and the superheroes discussion – you used that moment during TakeYourDaughter.. episode when Dwight and Jim corrected Michael as a basis, right? I love the idea of them united against Superman! And the supply closet scene was brilliance.
Author's Response:
I kind of wanted you to dislike Jim but at the same time feel sorry for him because he's so broken over wanting to be the one to make her smile.
Actually the superheros thing came from a discussion me and my friend Kath were having about that and she suggested I use it for one of the parts! And thank you I don't think anyone has ever called my writing brilliant before!
8 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. I like Jim getting flustered at work.
Author's Response: I can only imagine that he's been flustered more than once! I'm really glad you liked it!