Date: December 31, 2006 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love It's A Wonderful Life and The Office. It was an awesome idea to be the two together. Great writing. Loved the idea of Toby as Clarence!
Date: December 29, 2006 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Definitely one of the most creative fics I've ever read. And really well executed! Loved it!
8 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2006 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a very popular theme before Christmas, and it's always intereting to see how people will interpret it. I liked your version, altought I would have loved to have seen the two other ghosts included. Welcome to the fandom, I hope you'll continue to write in it.
8 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2006 10:54 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so sweet. It's an unusual idea but you really made it work! I love Toby as Clarence.
Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2006 08:49 am Title: Chapter 1
I've never reviewed a story on here, but I thought this one deserved one.
I absolutely loved the idea of this story, Toby was absolutely wonderful. And that line from Jim to Toby (like the person before me said) was absolutely wonderful.
This was an awesome fic, great, great job. I loved it! Keep writing, I'm excited to read more!
Author's Response: You can't see, but I'm blushing. Seriously. Thank you so much for your kind comments :)
Date: December 11, 2006 07:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Consider a beta for issues like verb tense.
Author's Response: Thank you for your suggestion. We actually thought we caught it all, but it was late when we were looking!
9 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2006 07:12 am Title: Chapter 1
That? That was awesome! I can't believe this is your first fic. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Well, I haven't tried "The Office" before, so I wasn't sure if I got the characters right. Thank you :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2006 06:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Very cute! That is such a great movie and a great take on it. I love Toby as Clarence.
Author's Response: I couldn't picture anyone other than Toby as a guide :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 10, 2006 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
AWWW.. I love this movie... tv show... and now this story! ;) LOVE that Toby was hs guide. Love how you mentioned that even though Toby and Stanley still worked there, they were still touched by Jim's life. Love it all. Really well done!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: December 10, 2006 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just watched It's A Wonderful Life. This had to be done. I'm so stoked to read it. I was going to do it myself, but I'm glad someone beat me to it. Mine would have been horrible.
Date: December 10, 2006 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ha! I'm not even done reading it yet, but I knew I had to comment when I read what has to be one of the greatest lines of all time:
“Man, I know you’re in HR, but this seems above and beyond the call of duty.”
Author's Response: Thanks. That line seemed appropriate, haha.