8 [Report This]Date: December 12, 2006 02:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohhh. I hope it goes this way, but I have a really sinking feeling that Pam will deny all again.*Heavy Sigh*
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10 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2006 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was just the story I needed to read tonight. I really love happy JAM endings!
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7 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2006 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sigh. If only, PuffingNoise, if only...
This is great - love it that she won't let herself cry (so like her to try to repress the tears, isn't it?), but then when he's there, she can't not let go - which is one of the reasons I think these two are ultimately meant to be. I'd so love for something like this to happen on the show. Any chance you could strong arm TPTB? :o)
Great work!
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7 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2006 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Even though that would be perfect, I doubt we will see such an easy Karen/Jim breakup
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Date: December 11, 2006 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was very touching. I really enjoyed it a lot/
There's just one thing that bugged me a little bit... At first, it seemed that the story was written from Pam's point of view, but then you switched to Jim's internal thoughts without any kind of break. It felt a little jarring, but the story was still overall well done.
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Thanks so much!
And I will make a line break for the POV change so that it's not so jarring. Thanks for letting me know about that!
10 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2006 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved every word.
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10 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2006 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
As much I want Jim and Pam together, I still feel bad for Karen. She obviously likes Jim, and who can blame her? If were in her shoes and Jim ran out on me for another woman, I'd be crushed. Tell me that Karen takes it okay?
Ha, I love this, though. So adorable and so perfect.
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10 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2006 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can say that I like Karen until I'm blue in the face (and I do like her, maybe because I really like Rashida Jones), but it just feels so good when Jim walks away from her without a second thought to go after Pam. So good. Mmm, this is great!
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8 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2006 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw; that's wonderful. The beginning nearly had me in tears (for example, "...she finally lets go, and sobs out her heartbreak into his shirtfront") but then you made it better. Thank you!
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Date: December 11, 2006 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Those hands slipping apart are just pure magic. Wow. We need a catalyst like this on the show!
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10 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2006 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nooo! I want more! This was great, by the way. So emotional and sweet. The little hand-holding part at the end really got me because my favorite Jim and Pam moment is in GWH when they hold hands after they kiss.
I want this to be how Jim and Pam really get together!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And the hand-holding part in GWH is one of my top favorite J/P moments, too!
10 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2006 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
very, very nice! I'm home sick today and that's just what I needed!!
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