9 [Report This]Date: December 15, 2006 06:24 am Title: January
It's like some odd game of fate played by the universe Like their whole relationship has been. But I like that Pam shows up at his game, that he's taking some initiative, that she's taking more steps forward with her art and that they'll both be at Phyllis' wedding!
Author's Response: Exactly, yaay for Phyllis's wedding! Thanks so much for your reviews!
9 [Report This]Date: December 15, 2006 06:21 am Title: December
You did a great job of conveying this over and over this chapter That makes the loneliness more palpable, because she has him there, but she knows he is no longer hers. I can feel her loneliness, But why oh why doesn't she talk to him when he asks? Oh, Pam....
10 [Report This]Date: December 15, 2006 05:54 am Title: January
I like that you've written this from Pam's POV. How will you deal with February? Can't wait to read it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far!
10 [Report This]Date: December 14, 2006 09:36 pm Title: January
Duuuuude. What's going ON with Jim and Karen? This story has been so elusive. They're on again, off again. And Pam.... GAH. Ask him out, do something. YEESH.
I totally love how you have Jim coaching basketball to 7 and 8 year-olds. Awesome. And it really is FNB for her to come to a game of his, so, yea on that. I'm really, really looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
You will find out what's up with Jim and Karen in the last part, I promise. I just didn't want them breaking up in the middle of the story, because I sort of wanted to do something different than a lot of the stories being written now (not that they aren't lovely, but I didn't want to step on anyone's toes.)
Also, hee, Fancy New Beesly. I'm glad you liked Jim coaching!
10 [Report This]Date: December 14, 2006 09:14 pm Title: January
Wow. I found part two here instead of over at LJ, but this part is just as loverly as the first. I can't wait for the rest!
Author's Response: Thanks for finding me! I just hope that February holds up to everyone's expectations!