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Reviewer: moofoot Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 05:08 am Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

I've been reading this since it came out even though I was overseas for most of it - loyal reader, hmm? ;) - and it's always nagged me that Pam cannot be such an awesome actress - even the pranks that required a more serious side of her ended up in her smiling slightly, especially if she's around just Jim when she gets that urge to smile, and - OK, you probably never even thought at that far. But the way things are turning out, I wouldn't be surprised if it was Pam's mum or Jim's mum or - something strange like that.

Actually no because that'd make them Jim's true love - which does not work, of course not. Plus that gorgeous-sounding stained glass masterpieces wouldn't fit in, either.

I'm just - not making sense. All I'm saying now is that this was an awesome update and the perfect way to end my tiring and irritating and limb-aching day. [I even organised the fics I would be reading today according to when I would be reading it and this came last so that that the sufficient assured-fluff factor would keep me smiling.
Thank you! 



Author's Response:

I am tickled that you have enjoyed this story enough to actually think about it so much!! 

And yes, you can always count on me to provide fluff - I love these characters too much not to want to see them happy (and together!!)

I promise - all will be explained by Day 12....! 

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 04:52 am Title: On The First Day of Christmas

Pam better be the one giving Jim those gifts - or his "true love" is gonna be SOL. LOL! 

Thank you for the lovely treat.  Perfect way to start my day!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 04:22 am Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

Mmmmm, lovely. I love that you have all the insecurity and fear still sitting there, because even when they do finally spill it with each other those things will have to be dealt with. Fantastic installment!

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 02:46 am Title: On The Third Day of Christmas

i am LOVING this so far. my only comment is that the french translation is a bit off, gramatically ... it would read a bit better as 'il n'y a pas d'autre amour QUE vous' but that's just my nit-picky french grammar nerd talking.

Author's Response: nit-pick away - I need the practice!  :-)  Actually, it had been pointed out to me, and I forgot to change it.  Thanks!! (Merci!)

Reviewer: Paper Jam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 12:08 am Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

I seriously wish this chapter were a person, so I could cuddle it. Just lovely.

 

Reviewer: Eppy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2007 10:00 pm Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

This story has me chomping at the bit!  I can not wait to see what happens next... waiting for each new chapter is agonizing!!! :)  Always the mark of a truly great author.

Reviewer: Missi Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2007 09:59 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

OK, I can go to bed happy now.  I just adore this story!!  You are doing a fabulous job and I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Kath Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2007 09:52 pm Title: On The Seventh Day of Christmas

Yipee!!!  Awesome chapter!! And before 2am, impressive my dear.  Now I can fall asleep a happy woman, and perhaps dream of stubble?  Thanks!!!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2007 04:38 pm Title: On The Sixth Day of Christmas

Oh, this chapter just hit all the right buttons. I love the couch cuddling and the drunken kissing that goes just a little farther than he would have expected. And sleeping over. I'm a big fan of sleepovers. :)

Reviewer: Paper Jam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2007 12:36 pm Title: On The Sixth Day of Christmas

Oh, lovely. So cute. I can't wait for the rest. Also, is it weird that I'm kind of 'shipping Jim/Parma?



Author's Response: Not really weird - she fits into the scheme.  But she's only interested in Jim wrt getting him with his True Love!

Reviewer: MaiaDawn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2007 11:07 am Title: On The Sixth Day of Christmas

of course you have me addicted to another one of your stories!  I almost do a little happy dance when I see you've updated this story!  Even though I'm pretty sure it's Pam sending the presents, I'm still eagerly awaiting the unveiling!

 

YAY!

Reviewer: Clare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2007 06:25 am Title: On The First Day of Christmas

Moxie, I love it. So sweet! Ahem... number 7 please and no cheating! We want all the details! ;-)

Reviewer: 69 cups of noodles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 06:57 pm Title: On The Sixth Day of Christmas

Such a perfect and sweet chapter.  I loved Jim being Pam's "date" and the flirting, and the KISS...oh, and the snuggling in bed.  I am truly hooked on this.  I can't wait to see what gift Parma brings on the 7th day!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  Hope to have the next chapter up tomorrrow evening!

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 06:25 pm Title: On The Sixth Day of Christmas

God I love this fic! I always do a little dance when I see an update. I also love your notes at the end, it makes the story a little more real. Keep up the wonderful updates!!

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 04:58 pm Title: On The Sixth Day of Christmas

Ohhhh, you are an evil, evil woman - worse than a hobbit! - for stopping this here!  I'm actually all antsy and worked up over this - seriously.  Make it happen!

This entire series is just such a treat!

Reviewer: girl7 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 04:45 pm Title: On The Fifth Day of Christmas

Eeeee!  Clapping my hands - he's going to the party!  Pam's going to die!  And thank god he finally just came clean to Karen....

You're continuing to amaze me with the creativity of how you're interpreting the song & coming up with gifts, BTW.

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 04:29 pm Title: On The Fourth Day of Christmas

Okay, Karen's really starting to annoy me.  Get a clue sister - move on!!  (Sorry - this is just a damned good story!)

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 04:19 pm Title: On The Third Day of Christmas

Ah, I love this!  Talk about a squee - when she was rubbing the Ben Gay....ooof.  What I would not give....

This is really, really clever, moxie!

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 03:59 pm Title: On The Second Day of Christmas

Good lord, moxie, this is really terrific - so clever!  And I'm totally hooked on the mystery, because even though I strongly suspect it's Pam, I'm dying to find out for sure - especially if it is. 

Next chapter!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 03:56 pm Title: On The Sixth Day of Christmas

OK, usually I would review chapter by chapter, but I was so engrossed I read straight through. I love this so much. I so, sooo wish these two would just cut to the chase. Nice job giving Karen a good send-off, too. Getting rid of her while letting her keep some dignity? Nicely done!

Now, I must demand that you write more! More! Go!



Author's Response:

LOL -this story is meant to teach you patience!  Not working, hmmm?  :-)  Well, as far as cutting to the chase, I think you underestimate their ability for self-doubt.  But it'll all be okay in the end...

And I'm trying to get chapter 7 done now... 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 03:19 pm Title: On The Sixth Day of Christmas

What a wonderful New Year's eve surprise for Pam to find Jim there and then go back to his place.  Nice

Author's Response: thanks - onward to 2007, eh?

Reviewer: stampsgal Anonymous 8 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 09:38 am Title: On The Sixth Day of Christmas

That was such a great chapter!  Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: thanks!  I'm working on the next chapter as we speak :-)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 09:07 am Title: On The Sixth Day of Christmas

YAY for New Years kisses!!!!  This chapter was my favorite kind.  Yummy and delicious throughout - leaving you wanting more!!

So - get working on that.   OK?  :)

Just one little thing that made me giggle.

He was pretty sure his ability to remain a gentleman was running pretty low, and I didn't want to do anything he or she would regret tomorrow.

Liar.  You totally did!! :)



Author's Response:

haha - okay, it was 2am when I finished it! Apparently I throw myself TOO much into the story!!  :-)

And, yep - I sure would!!!!!! 

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 09:00 am Title: On The Sixth Day of Christmas

Okay, Moxie, he's got the comforter; he's got her under the comforter; the next logical step is....? This was an especially sweet chapter - glad Pam is taking some initiative (and that Jim is gobbling it up.)

Author's Response: Patience, dear Colette.  Remember, it's still Jim and it's still Pam.  And while I know NeverEnoughJam will disagree, this mix doesn't necessarily mean steamy things on the 1st.....if it doesn't, you can be sure it will eventually....

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 08:55 am Title: On The Sixth Day of Christmas

Happy New Year to you! I'm in a rush to head out to a family lunch, but I couldn't not read the latest update in this story. I'm very happy Jim had a good New Year's Eve.

Author's Response:

Awww - thanks!  I'm glad that you like it so much!!

Hope you have a great lunch! Happy New Year! 

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