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Reviewer: MaiaDawn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2007 02:27 pm Title: On The Eleventh Day of Christmas

As always, what an amazing chapter, and well worth the wait!

How on earth could you have been worried!  This was absolutely fantastic! 

While I loved the shower scene, and the well written ending, I have to say my favorite was Jim's awkwardness in the kitchen.  So cute!

 

Absolutely can't wait for the ending!  (although I'm going to be said to see this one go...)

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 07:08 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

Oh Moxie, this was just too beautiful and so worth the wait.  My god, shower sex, chocolate, Star Wars, cute PJ's, sofa sex...you are one hell of a storyteller, girl!  Looking foward to the big reveal at the end!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 03:29 pm Title: On The Eleventh Day of Christmas

When you start with fun times in the shower, you know it's gonna be a good slumber party! And OMG one day until the reveal!

Reviewer: Sheppy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 02:47 am Title: On The Eleventh Day of Christmas

Wow.  This is just one of the best stories I think I've ever read.  Can't wait for Day Twelve!!

Reviewer: Julie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 01:21 am Title: On The Eleventh Day of Christmas

wonderful!!  I just read all eleven chapters, it took me like two hours   I can't wait for the last one

Reviewer: Allie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 09:19 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

I never review stuff, but this is such a great story! I can't wait for day 12!

...think there could be a sequel? the 12 days of valentine's day or something?? :) (j/k!!)

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 08:07 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

and you were worried why? aww... i love me some jam.. please please please don't take too long with day 12!

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 07:56 pm Title: On The Eleventh Day of Christmas

Wow...I literally squeed when I saw a new chapter posted. Needed something happy after the Golden Globes...great chapter.  That was hot!!

Reviewer: StarryDreamer Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 04:54 pm Title: On The Eleventh Day of Christmas

I actually registered just to tell you that this story is amazing.  Even though its past Christmas and the time frame of the story, the story still seems so real and present.  I'm so curious to hear how the story ends- you must hurry up with chapter 12 (the 12th day!!).  Either that or I just might burst!  Thank you for the beautiful chapters, though.

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 04:17 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

perfection!  Absolute perfection!  I cannot wait too see chapter 12...although..will we ever find out where Pam was in Chapter 10..when she was gone all day?  For some reason that had me concerned! 

 

Great job!!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 01:02 pm Title: On The Eleventh Day of Christmas

Mox - I have no idea why you are worried, this was divine.  Thank you so much for such a wonderful selection of gifts.  I'm giddy waiting for the 12th!!!  Hurry!  Hurry!!



Author's Response: Thanks, sweetie!  I can promise the wait on 12 won't be nearly as long!!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 12:18 pm Title: On The Eleventh Day of Christmas

oh my goodness my heart is SO content right now. this story is amazing. when i saw you updated i yelled to my roommate and we both IMMEDIATELY started reading. can't wait for that day number 12!!! you're doing such a good job of telling the story, moving things along, and keeping it mysterious! it's lovely!!! 

Reviewer: monkeybear Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 11:24 am Title: On The Eleventh Day of Christmas

Hooray!  This is the perfect combination of adorable sweetness and steam. 

Finally - I really love that you've managed to keep an element of suspense around who is sending Jim those gifts... I swear, I go back an forth between being 100% sure it's Pam and being 100% sure it's not Pam at least 2 or 3 times a chapter.

I know (from stalking the TWoP boards which they have for some reason DELETED) you've been busy, traveling, etc. and am sooo thankful you've kept this story going!! 

*sits and tries to wait patiently for Day 12*



Author's Response: thanks so much!  I will be writing notes for that last chapter on my flight back, so I hope I don't have to take so long to post it - thought part of me will hate to see this one end. :-)

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 10:43 am Title: On The Eleventh Day of Christmas

Once again, Mox, you've delivered on your promise. How hot was that shower scene? And how sweet the last paragraph? Not to mention Jim's awkwardness in asking about 'protection' and his impatience to come over to her place already. Looking forward to the conclusion...you've really sustained suspense with the gifts. Thanks Moxie! 

Author's Response: thanks - I struggled with the ending, deciding sometimes less is more in terms of details.  Besides, there's always the next chapter.  I just hope I don't let anyone (especially Jim!) down.  ;-)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 06:53 am Title: On The Eleventh Day of Christmas

Oh happiness, Moxie!!  The anticipation was getting to all of us -- not just Jim.  And this is so true: "Maybe some of the heartache we've both suffered could have been prevented had one of us lost control a long time ago.”  And chasing Parma down -- awesome.  A little wink to those of us who are getting antsy waiting for each new chapter?

The 'protection' conversation -- freaking adorable!  And chocolate fondue -- that Beesly thinks of everything.

And I am still giddy with excitement for Day 12 and the big reveal  ;o) 

Reviewer: 69 cups of noodles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 06:47 am Title: On The Eleventh Day of Christmas

I am giddy over this chapter, moxie.  Completely giddy.  I would comment on the first half of the chapter but time doesn't exist for me until that shower scene.  I can't even count how many times my stomach did a cartwheel reading Jim and Pam finally being able to be together.  I love how you've made their first physical contact so sweet and beautiful and so worth the wait.  I canNOT wait to read Chapter 12!

Reviewer: fireworkfiasco Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 12:35 am Title: On The Eleventh Day of Christmas

YAY IMPERIAL MARCH.

You? Rock. I am not even going to bother you with more words of praise because there are just. no. words.

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2007 05:30 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

i am (im)patiently awaiting the last two days! this is such an awesome christmas story! please update soon!

Reviewer: thatswhatshesaid07 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2007 04:23 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

You're killing me right now. I need those last 2 days!!

Reviewer: BananaMae Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2007 09:00 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

This was excellent! I can't wait for day 11!

Reviewer: Grinlda Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 07:14 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

This is amazing. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 08:08 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

That was another great chapter!  Jammy sweetness alternating with Hot and Sexy Jam, gotta love it.  And doin' the deed on Toby's desk??  Couldn't stop laughing at that one, Meester Scott.

Reviewer: Semby Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 07:06 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

Two more days! Two more days for Pam to stake her claim before Parma reveals her true identity and admits her love! Or... something. But I'm very much looking forward to this promise of <i>tomorrow</i>.

And why the hell did Michael have to arrive in the office so damn early???

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 05:05 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

kjdghfskjdhfg. okay, so i love this fic. and have loved it from the start. but seriously, adding phonesex to it just made it like ten thousand times better. so there you go.

Reviewer: shannanagin Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 05:01 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

“Let me guess - you guys were having sex in the back, weren't you? Please tell me you were using Toby's desk.”

Hee. Hee. That is so something Michael would say.

I have so many questions that need to be answered. What's the deal with Parma? Where did Pam go that one day? Who is Jim's True Love?

Please update soon!... Although I'm kind of sad that this only has two more chapters left.

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