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Reviewer: epiphilly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2008 02:16 am Title: It Would Never Be Okay

I thought this was perfect. I know you posted this a little while ago, but i just waned to tell you i adored this story, as well as the first part of this series. I adored the line "I'm not going anywhere, Bees...Pam." I thought it was beautiful and said so much. The beauty of both the stories so far in the series lies in the simplicity and sincerity you achieve. You're doing a lovely job, and i really do hope you continue with the series.

Reviewer: civillove Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2007 06:47 am Title: The Magic Tide Pen

I loved this story. it made me laugh and go aww all at the same time =]]

Reviewer: HemlockMartinis Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2007 11:47 pm Title: The Magic Tide Pen

For some reason I can't get to the story...

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2006 04:57 pm Title: The Magic Tide Pen

That was cute.  Nice moment between them! 

I can totally believe this: Pam rolled her eyes, pretending to look annoyed by his question but she didn't answer him.



Author's Response: I'm hoping to churn out several of these moments between them, to remind us why all this angst is worth it. :D

Reviewer: lano Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2006 12:42 am Title: The Magic Tide Pen

"That I hit my chin on the basket, naturally." Jim said.  - this made me chuckle.

His stomach was flat, and smooth, a small covering of hair over his chest, and of course a trail between his navel and into his pants. - Guh.  Totally hot.

I'm not sure why you haven't received any reviews, because this was a fun little moment.  Good writing.



Author's Response: Aww thanks, you just made my day! :D

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 17, 2006 07:52 pm Title: It Would Never Be Okay

Enjoyed this flash back to Season 2. I need to remember the pain Jim went through back then - maybe it would cut some of the angst I feel now.

Author's Response: Yeah, its definitely been a painful couple of weeks! It sort of puts Jim's feelings in perspective now...

Reviewer: Par5 Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 17, 2006 09:20 am Title: It Would Never Be Okay

Well, I had to review because my hubby uses Mission Impossible as his ring tone too. So is this series of fics based on season 2 part of going back to "happier" days to ease the pain of last night?!

Author's Response: You are definitely correct. I'm trying to write it in chronological (sp?) order but I am already half way through writing a continuation of Halloween. I hope you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Winky Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 17, 2006 04:33 am Title: It Would Never Be Okay

I'm pretty sure that the singular of "Dundies" is "Dundie", but I could be wrong..

Sweet fic.  Hopefully it's not a one-shot?



Author's Response: Thanks! I changed it! It is a one shot but its part of a series! Magic Tide Pen is the first part, and this is the second part!

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