8 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2009 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful! Excellent work!! I love the ending - perfect!
Date: March 14, 2009 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's a really cute and original idea. I like the way you compared Pam and Roy and then Pam and Jim in her mom's eyes. Really sweet. Great job. :)
Date: March 01, 2009 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really great. :)
Emily is so sweet, I've always loved her character. This was a very cute way to get them together.
I'd love to know what happened when they got in the car.
Date: February 16, 2009 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww I loved that. I always thought the "yeah I think I am" was definitely an answer to "are you in love with with too?" or something along those lines.
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2008 08:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I love that Pam's mom is so encouraging, especially in that last line. This is a great piece :)
Date: January 22, 2007 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I know it's about Pam's mom, but I agree with Shan21...please tell us what happened in the car?? pleeeease
Date: January 13, 2007 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, the line about staring at Brad PItt's beautiful rear end made me LOL! Priceless! What a neat story -- it was so nice to see Pam's mom again (they should so have her back on the show, revealing her side of the conversation from Casino Night).
7 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2007 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so sweet. I can so see Pam's mom rooting for Jim, especially after all the wonderful things I'm sure she's heard about him from Pam, and her intervening would be a nice way to get them together. :)
Date: January 12, 2007 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Go Mrs. Beesley. Someone had to tell Jim about depressed Pam
Date: January 12, 2007 02:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Ack! So good! I'd like to request that you add a "deleted scene" chapter in which we see what happened in that car with Jim and why Pam didn't come home that night. Pleeeeeease?
Date: January 11, 2007 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
aw, made me very happy! i <3 mrs. beesley. very cool to get her point of view on casino night.
Date: January 11, 2007 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was very cute, and an original way of answering the challenge.
One tiny thing though in the timeline; they said in BfV that the inventory/luau was taking place in the evening so this story probably would have needed to take the next day. Still that is a tiny thing, and your story rocked! :)
By the way, you can enter your story in the challenge by clicking on the "respond to the challenge" button below the challenge and it will show you titles of all stories you have written and you can check the one you want to enter in the challenge.
Author's Response: Thanks Morning Angel. Yeah, I kind of realized that about the timeline too (oops). I'll just pretend they had inventory in the very very early evening ;). I'll make sure to add my story to the challenge. Still a bit of a newbie so I'm still learning to navigate my way through MTT.
Date: January 11, 2007 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I just love happy endings and you really came through!
10 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2007 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved this!
8 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2007 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay, so I admit when I read this summary I was skeptical. But you really pulled it off. Great story; plausible way for Jim and Mrs. Beesly to meet; lovely ending.
9 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2007 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww, so sweet! I love it!
8 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2007 10:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay for Mama Beesly! Poor Jim must have had a rough few minutes with Karen before he showed back up. I really liked this- good job!