Date: January 17, 2007 06:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Sad but sweet. Loved the ending.
Date: January 15, 2007 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
First it was beautifully sad and then it evolved into beautifully romantic.
Date: January 15, 2007 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. Love the pacing of it.
9 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2007 11:51 am Title: Chapter 1
I have to say that this is beautiful. I really enjoy reading stories that have sort of a poetic feel, and this is one of them. I love the repetition of the "okay" line, it just fits perfectly every time. I love how it helps to pace the story.
And the ending, with Jim pulling the emergency stop? Very, very hot. I loved this.
Author's Response: Haha. I wrote this after watching Greys Anatomy and they seem to utilize the emergency stop to its fullest. And it is very hot.
Date: January 15, 2007 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, I like how there is very little dialogue in this -- Pam & Jim can do lots of things besides talk -- hee!
9 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2007 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful.
8 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2007 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1
all about love. so great. poetic.
Date: January 15, 2007 09:36 am Title: Chapter 1
this was beautiful
Date: January 15, 2007 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1
He breaks away and looks at her and she can see the wall building up in his eyes. She should know, she is quite the expert at it.
Nice line. I love the repetition you use throughout; it gives this a great structure and a great rhythm. And the scenario? At the risk of being cheesy, it is "okay" with me.
Author's Response: Hahaha. Thanks. Not cheesy at all.