Date: August 11, 2008 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
To answer your earlier question, I think that was a perfect ending. It IS hard to come out and say what you're feeling, but sometimes it has to be done. I like how you have Jim confront her, and how he won't let her off the hook. Very good writing, and lots of humorous moment to make it fun!
Date: August 11, 2008 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love your mix of humor, tenderness and sexual tension. Very good reading!
Date: August 11, 2008 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jim seems so bemused! This is really enjoyable so far.
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2007 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved this so much! More please?
Date: October 29, 2007 10:26 am Title: Chapter 3
YESSS you need to continue this ! i LOVE it ! i want to see what happens on the rest of the tripp (: boston can be a very romantic city, and i would love to see how Jim and Pam are thereee !
i love it so far. pleaseeee finish it, i beg of you, PLEASE !
10 [Report This]Date: December 30, 2006 01:48 am Title: Chapter 3
this is like th best fanfic i have read so far on this website, i love it
7 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
O hot goodness. Nice. :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 11:56 am Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!! My favorite parts were the details like him having to tilt his head when he got on the bus, the solitaire game, and of course, the final kiss! Well done and very in character.
9 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2006 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
"In words". Hee.
Fabulous. Funny, sweet, sexy, and absolutely charming.
8 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
“Now, Beesly, was that so hard?”
hehe! brilliant!
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
More? Oh, there better be more. I love this fic. It's hot and sweet and sexy. I can't wait to see wehre it goes from here.
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hah. More? YES. This is so fun to read.
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 3
Definitely, definitely more!
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
I smiled the whole time I was reading this. Love!
8 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 09:43 am Title: Chapter 3
My vote is for more, please.
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 09:33 am Title: Chapter 3
Well, I'm always up for more...
8 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 08:39 am Title: Chapter 3
That was so sweet. (Hmm, that is also TWSS) I'd love to read more - either another chapter or a new story from you!
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 08:16 am Title: Chapter 3
More? Are you freaking kidding? YES! What a great story!!
Date: July 27, 2006 07:28 am Title: Chapter 1
awww. i'm definitely voting more chapters :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 06:58 am Title: Chapter 3
That was great! I think you could totally end it here, and the story would be complete. If was fun, flirty and now one of my favorites.
9 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 03:07 am Title: Chapter 3
I demand that you continue this.
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 02:39 am Title: Chapter 3
Sigh. That was so sweet. Just lovely. I actually did sigh after I read it. Just a wistful, aww sigh. If that makes any sense.
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2006 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. Please write more soon!