10 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2009 08:41 pm Title: Her Scarf
amazing!!! this is so beautiful, its like poetry =)
Date: June 01, 2008 09:14 am Title: Her Scarf
Mmm, very nice. I love the detail about the crocheting itself, and the way you make Pam sound like she's smiling with every stitch despite being discouraged (I wish I could knit or crochet with her patience!). Great job!
Date: January 15, 2008 11:02 pm Title: Her Scarf
That was beautiful!
Date: January 27, 2007 08:08 am Title: Her Scarf
She figures that if it happened any earlier or later it wouldn’t have turned out the way it did. Or been as perfect despite the obvious flaws.
Amen. Everything takes its own time. This was lovely.
Date: January 25, 2007 07:14 pm Title: Her Scarf
Hm. That just makes me feel so happy and warm. Like a scarf. Mine, that I wear out, has skulls and crossbones. This makes me want to crochet my own. That isnt black. But pink, warm, and fuzzy.
Date: January 23, 2007 06:26 pm Title: Her Scarf
I just read this three times in a row, to make sure I hadn't missed one syllable of loveliness. What a perfect metaphor. Or been as perfect despite the flaws..that absolutely sums up what they (could) have together. And the last three lines are killers. LOVE this madly.
Date: January 23, 2007 06:00 pm Title: Her Scarf
I forgot to reply, because the squeeness that is just generally you overwhelmed me, but I love this and the subtlty of it; you don't go OHMYGOD JIM IS HERE AND THEY ARE GOING TO KISS CAN YOU FEEL THE TENSION? you play it soft and light and perfect. *sigh*
*beta hat*: "fingers" appears 3 times in the last 4 lines.
*beta hat off*: AMAZING. Which you should know. *IS DED*
Date: January 23, 2007 02:24 pm Title: Her Scarf
This is the best prompt ever. I love the images you've put in my mind here. My favoritest part....
She trails a hand along his arm, fingers intertwining through the soft yarn. She leans forward as his eyes close. She whispers in his ear.
“I made it.” She feels his next word start from the tips of her fingers.
“Beautiful.”
She can feel the scarf slip from between their fingers as his lips catch hers.
Beautiful indeed.
10 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2007 10:14 am Title: Her Scarf
yes, yes - very nice!! Yay!
Jam shippers can even make crocheted scarfs sexy!
10 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2007 05:47 am Title: Her Scarf
Wonderful.
Date: January 22, 2007 07:14 pm Title: Her Scarf
Mmm... must find my knitting bag.....
And this is sooo Pam & Jim: One step forward, two steps back. Two steps forward, no steps back. Hoping to see more of the latter and less of the former.
Date: January 22, 2007 07:11 pm Title: Her Scarf
That was just beautifully poetic. This was just a gorgeous line: He slides the scarf slowly from around her neck, long fingers catching on every imperfection, somehow smoothing each one out. They both make each other better when they're together!
Date: January 22, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Her Scarf
Just as the story says...beautiful
Date: January 22, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Her Scarf
Beautifully written, I love the line about being perfect despite the obvious flaws. That is definitely Jim and Pam.
Date: January 22, 2007 06:15 pm Title: Her Scarf
Beautiful. I like the way you used the creation of the scarf as a metaphor for Pam relationship with Jim.