Date: February 05, 2007 10:01 am Title: Chapter 3
Lovely. This made me feel all warm inside.
Date: January 25, 2007 08:35 am Title: Chapter 3
YAY for happy, together, Jim & Pam!!! Lovely ending. Thanks Puff!
Author's Response: Thank you! :o)
Date: January 24, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
She shook her head, her hands still over her eyes. "I'm just... a little overwhelmed."
That's all right, Pam, we are too. *sniffs, dabs eyes*
Thank you for this beautiful story. I would love to see them slow dance at Phyllis' wedding...sigh.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: January 24, 2007 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
THIS is exactly how I am hoping Phyllis & BVVR's wedding will go for Pam & Jim. Wishful thinking, no? Great story, sorry that it's done.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: January 24, 2007 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
I loved the whole thing. Thanks so much for writing this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: January 24, 2007 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really felt for Pam in this chapter. Jim giving her the cold shoulder after getting upset over her conversation with Karen - and then Valentine's Day when neither had plans, and Jim didn't offer any... Sigh.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: January 24, 2007 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yay, yay, yay - such is the stuff lovely fluffly Jam dreams are made. I knew you'd do this so well!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your encouragement and enthusiasm over the course of posting this story! :oD
Date: January 24, 2007 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
You tell him, Pam! "Only if you come inside with me" is right. I love the phrasing of "sweetly awkward" and the flirting pre-confession you fit in there. I could see them sliding back into the horribly obvious friendship on the show and you write it wonderfully!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading, and for your specific reviews!
Date: January 24, 2007 10:33 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh my gosh I hate cliffhangers! Why must you torture us so? So good, I love it.
Author's Response: Hee, thanks!
Date: January 24, 2007 10:02 am Title: Chapter 2
This is great! I like that Karen pushed Pam, because Jim's lying could only get him in trouble. I enjoy the slow progression between Jim and Pam, which I think is very much how I see this unfolding once they are both single!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you feel it's realistic!
Date: January 24, 2007 07:37 am Title: Chapter 2
Puff, this is delicious. Angsty, but delicious. And very true to character.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much!
7 [Report This]Date: January 24, 2007 06:38 am Title: Chapter 2
I was thinking on it, after the last episode (the Return), and while we might be so close to something happening between the two of them, I've a feeling it's going to turn out like this. Good chapter, here. Well written. Respect.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: January 24, 2007 06:25 am Title: Chapter 2
Very nice chapter! I love how you had Karen be totally awesome and not a raving *****, as so many people try to make her. I'm so glad you have Pam and Jim "chatting" - can't wait to see what you're going to pull out next!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, I get the vibe from Karen that she isn't a bitch unless the situation REALLY warrants it. And in this case, I think she'd realize that there's no reason for her to shut Pam out for something that wasn't her fault. Thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: January 24, 2007 06:24 am Title: Chapter 2
Yet again, you captured them so well. I can just hear Karen and Pam's voices during their goodbyes. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad the characterization seems to be correct.
Date: January 24, 2007 06:11 am Title: Chapter 2
You are very good with your how you end your chapters. You want us begging you for more so as to see what happens.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: January 23, 2007 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved Pam's "Oh shit!" Such a great story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hee, thanks. I can't really picture Pam saying that out loud, but I can definitely picture her saying it to herself in her head.
Date: January 23, 2007 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like that you made Karen a little pushy (e.g., her questions re: Roy) and having that trigger this whole exchange. Felt right. Also, Pam's reticence, ambivalence, awkwardness, pain, not knowing what to say...you really made that vivid. Now must hear her convo with Jim pronto! (Please?)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad the characters'actions rang true... I hope chapter 2 lives up to your expectations!
Date: January 23, 2007 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
You can't leave it like that. More please
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: January 23, 2007 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG, this is like season finale cliffhanger! Holy smokes! And it sounds exactly like I would expect Karen & Pam to talk. Who are you anyway???? Mindy? BJ? Greg Daniels?
Author's Response: Hehe wow, what a huge compliment! I hope chapters 2 and 3 live up to the firsat chapter!
Date: January 23, 2007 11:25 am Title: Chapter 1
ooh, hurry and post more! I'm dying to see Jim's reactino to all this!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: January 23, 2007 11:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I mean, does he act like he is?
Ahh. The equivelent of "Why? Did she say something?"
Oh these two. And the cameras and the awkward...
I cannot wait to 'hear' their conversation.
No pressure but just hurry up will you? ;)
Author's Response: Wow, I totally didn't mirror the "why did she say something?" sentiment on purpose! Cool! Maybe I shouldn't have admitted that and just let everyone think I was clever...
Date: January 23, 2007 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Don't stop! Don't leave us hanging!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: January 23, 2007 11:08 am Title: Chapter 1
I like how natural your dialogue is. And Karen's awkwardness is very nice at the beginning of this. I cannot wait to see more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you think the dialogue is natural. That's one of the things that I always have to put extra work into.
Date: January 23, 2007 10:03 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG. Seriously, when are you going to post the second chapter. This -- was AWESOME. Seriously. Seriously. When?
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2007 08:38 am Title: Chapter 1
So realistic, it's scary. Have you been going through the writer's trash cans or something ;) Can't wait for Chap. II.
Author's Response: Hehe, what a huge compliment! Thanks so much!