Date: February 15, 2010 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Yet another one of your gems that I've discovered, nomadshan. Simply beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks, NanReg!
10 [Report This]Date: June 01, 2009 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh...this was amazing. AMAZING.
Author's Response: Thanks, Liv! Glad you liked it. :)
Date: December 16, 2008 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god! When it got up to the part where Jim pulled out the origami dove, kissed it then released it, tears sprang to my eyes so fast it was crazy. That was beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you, moonmouse :) I'm glad you liked it.
Date: August 11, 2008 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was beautiful. I love the love and respect young Jamey has for hos grandfather. That's how it should be. Apparently Pam and Jim did something right with their family!
Author's Response: Thank you, Strider!
Date: August 06, 2008 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1
So, thanks to this challenge being re-posted, I came across this again. And it is still hauntingly beautiful and sweetly sad. I love this image: The years since had all but erased [the pain], until nothing was left but faint impressions on paper.- How apt that he still thinks in 'paper' terms when he thinks back to those days. Gorgeous.
Author's Response: Thanks, Lis :)
Date: April 09, 2008 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was just lovely. A small tear in my eyes. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you, argentlife - welcome to MTT!
Date: May 14, 2007 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1
fantastically touching
Author's Response: Thank you, Calli! :)
8 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2007 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow...had tears in my eyes. Very touching.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 19, 2006 11:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Sweet and sad.
Author's Response: Thanks, gotkona! :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2006 12:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Ok I just finished reading this story for the second time, and I am crying my eyes out! I can totally see Jim as a "Pops" and Pam as "Gran", and ugh its just to perfect. I wish I had something better to say though, it's just this older man feels like Jim, you know? This is an excellent piece of fiction. Now I have to go blow my nose...
Author's Response: Thank you, tizzy! :)
9 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2006 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Add me to the lot who teared up as they read this. So touching. I could really picture Jim as an older man.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) I loved imagining him old.
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2006 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm haunted by this story. It is so beautiful. And, yes, I'm very teary also.
Author's Response: Thanks, TabascoChick :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2006 07:16 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so beautiful. Truthfully, that doesn't even begin to describe how wonderful it was.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2006 02:00 am Title: Chapter 1
So so good. You made me cry a little at the end of this- the dove, "But we had almost double that together" ... ok I'm practically speechless here. I'll just join in with Ham and Cheese's flailing.
Author's Response: *claps* Thanks :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2006 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1
"casinos made them nervous"
Best line in the fic. And I admit, I got a bit teary at the end. Lovely little piece.
Author's Response: Thanks, ribbon!
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2006 12:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Ok, you slayed me. Shades of Six Feet Under finale montage type emotion...
Author's Response: My work here is done! Not really, I just can't help myself :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, I cried too. This was so lovely.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it :)
9 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh the dove. The dove. I love you for this fic.
I'm still crying though.
Author's Response: Luv ya too, darlin' - tissue? - I'm off to read Thursday Nights that you just posted :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really good! Nice to read a different type of future fic, even if it did make me cry. I loved the line "So long ago. So painful at the time. Such a good thing people don’t remember pain." It makes me happy to think that after all the pain Jim's been through, that they'll have almost double-27 years together to make up for it. Beautiful fic.
*sniff*
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, Shroom! :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh... oh oh oh, I have tears in my eyes. This was so sweet and poignant and beautiful. :sniff:
I love: "casinos made them nervous", "and he thought maybe they should move to the desert", and the dove at the end. The DOVE. :flails:
Beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks, Ham and Cheese! :)
7 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very sad and sweet.
Author's Response: :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1
wow, i can't even find words for this, just beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1
This was awesome. I was so into the story that the ending took me by surprise. My heart broke when I read the last few lines. Jim sending the origami dove out over the ocean was sheer beauty.
Author's Response: Thanks, kaystar :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 10:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Somehow, I knew Pam was gone as I was reading this, but the second-to-last line brought tears to my eyes.
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing that, Luna :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 09:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh. Oh. Oh.
You made me cry.
That was...just absolutely beautiful.
Author's Response: That makes two of us - thanks, xoxoxo :)