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Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2007 01:17 pm Title: Black Cadillac

He knew before she pointed it out which one was hers: the only one with curtains in the window and potted plants on the steps.

Of course, that's our Pam's place!  Love how the attraction between them is already getting awkward.  She still can't call him Jim.  Sigh.

Onto the next....

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2007 01:09 pm Title: Leather Gloves

Ok, I remember reading this awhile back, and then forgetting about it.  So when I saw the Mean magazine cover, it totally brought me back to the beginning of this story, so here I am.  I loved "Hope" too, and am looking foward to reading the rest of this.  Thanks!

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 12:17 pm Title: Red Lipstick

This story is just so adorable and wonderful.  I love how you've captured the 40's (not that I lived through them).  I especially loved how Jim noticed the straw thing and that Pam even asked him how he knew.  Very cute.

Reviewer: soverykitsch Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 04:22 pm Title: Leather Gloves

I love this! I was so glad to see you had updated. Great chapter, and I was really happy to see Rear Window referenced (I adore that movie)!

By the way, I love your top in that picture, it's adorable!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you know what that movie is, with that stupid "Disturbia" movie out everyone seemed to forget about the original...and it came out in August '54 so it worked well.

And thanks, It's from Kohl's I have it in four colors...hah 

heres the link: http://www.kohls.com/products/product_page_vanilla3.jsp?PRODUCT%3C%3Eprd_id=432558493&FOLDER%3C%3Efolder_id=438488925&bmUID=1179368194427

thanks for the review!! 

Reviewer: JimiousThePamazing Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 03:59 pm Title: Red Lipstick

Ok, so i am a sucker for anything and everything 50's and i absolutely love this story.

I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 03:37 pm Title: Tin Foil

This just breaks my heart. I love everything you've got going here, and truth be told, I miss the days when sleeping around wasn't common. Guess I'm just an old-fashioned gal. Ok, back to reading!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 02:06 pm Title: Red Lipstick

Yayayayayay!!! Imagine me saying this about 50,000 more times and then you'll get an idea of how excited I was to see a new chapter!

And it was totally great too! I was too distracted by the content to look for grammar errors, so I don't have any to point out, but maybe I'll notice some on a second read-through. For now, just, thanks for updating! :D

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 01:04 pm Title: Green Grass

Awwww....I wanted Pam to stay and watch the fireworks with Jim. =(  Is she going to come back??

Reviewer: aaliokulta Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 09:31 am Title: Green Grass

I really like it! I don't usually go for AU's like this, but you do it really well. I giggled so much at Pam and Jim doing their little detective gag. It was cute. :)

Reviewer: lena76 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 06:04 am Title: Green Grass

Thank you ,Thank you for the update !!! Loved  Jim's sleeves  rolled up & tousled hair...I can't wait for them to "hook up"...That is IF this is where the story is leading ;)Awesome!!

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2007 08:52 pm Title: Green Grass

So glad that you are continuing this story!  I was going to write you some very strongly worded posts on TWoP, but I see that is now unnecessary :)  Carry on!

Reviewer: Emmypie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2007 08:01 pm Title: Green Grass

This is so sad. But I really love it.

Reviewer: McGigi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2007 06:49 pm Title: Green Grass

Ooh, pampongchamp, I LOVE this story! I keep picturing it in the palette of Far From Heaven. It's a great storyline, and I love Boss!Jim. I'm really excited to see where this goes- it's a nice contrast between the intensity of their feelings and the ridgid society.
Also, How Far Is Too Far was hysterical! It may have had the disctinction of having the funkiest looking baby in any film.
Keep on writing!

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2007 08:02 pm Title: Yellow Roses

I am really intrigued by your story.  It's just so charming.  

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2007 12:37 pm Title: Yellow Roses

...in her breathiest voice...

Um, yeah. "Private Eye". You kinkster.

When you were describing her dress, I kept thinking, I hope there's no Angela in this office - oh, wait, it's the 50s - they're all Angela!

At any rate, I like the boldness of Pam here, even if she doesn't really know what the effect is on Jim.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2007 12:31 pm Title: Tin Foil

Yeah, this one's a heartbreaker. It's a nice dimension to add for Jim's character. I also like that Jim the Boss lives with his mother, yet Pam lives alone. I understand why, it's just a nice switch-up.

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 07:37 pm Title: Yellow Roses

I am SO happy to see you continuing this.  I just love the setting and the story and the characterizations and the details.  And I think I want her dress.  ...and, umm...."Mr. Halpert" indeed!  Yes, I can agree with Nomad's assessment.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 08:04 am Title: Yellow Roses

OMG, Pam & Jim with the 'hard boiled' detective banter -- too freaking cute.  (Are costumes next?  hee!)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 06:28 am Title: Yellow Roses

I love this chapter too.  I can hear Jim joking around with her....and they're into role playing huh?   Interesting...

I could also completely envision the look on Jim's face when he saw her in the dress, made my heart pitter patter.

Lovely job.  

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 06:06 am Title: Yellow Roses

I'm usually wary of AU's - so hard to pull off well (with notable exceptions like the amazing Hope) but I really think you're making it work here. They still seem like themselves yet the retro vibe comes thru too. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: lena76 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 05:35 am Title: Yellow Roses

Oh I am in love with this story :) "As though it had a mind of it's own,his hand started to reach toward her"....sigh....

Reviewer: appeteaser Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 09:45 pm Title: Leather Gloves

I actually registered here just so I could comment on this story. I used to be totally not into AU stories and (surprise, surprise) Hope totally turned me - which is why I gave this story a chance...and am totally hooked. Keep it up!

Author's Response: yay! i'm so glad!

Reviewer: colorblind Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 09:27 pm Title: Yellow Roses

Aww, that was the cutest exchange in his office!  I could just hear him speaking that.  Jim needs to .....  do something.  About Roy.  Run him over with his Caddy.

Reviewer: lena76 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 11:00 am Title: Tin Foil

I am soooo glad this has been updated...Thank you !!! Awww I feel sad for Jim...he needs some cheering up ;)

Reviewer: MaiaDawn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 10:52 am Title: Tin Foil

oh how sad!  I'm so glad you updated, I have been wondering about this fic!  Please continue soon!

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