1 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2021 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1
The Phyllis one is my favorite, but you've really got everyone's voices down.
Date: February 06, 2007 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this was very cool. I love the feelings evoked in all of them, and how they're subtle enough that you really have to make us think about who each of them is about. Poor Toby - his is just brutally sad.
Date: February 05, 2007 01:09 am Title: Chapter 1
1. Toby and Pam 2. Phyllis and Bob 3. Dwight and Angela 4. Kelly and Ryan 5. Creed and his Computer..... Am I close? Great writing--I loved it! I was trying to pick which number was my favorite, but I couldn't--they're all great in their own unique little ways.
Date: February 04, 2007 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Adorable! It took me a few reads to figure out Phyllis, but then that one fell into place, too.
Heh, I actually do really like to hear Kelly laugh.
10 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2007 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, wow. This is just awesome. Poor Toby -- I love how you talk about 'feeling more than just shared sadness.' That is such a fabulous, subtle way of showing that he has feelings for her, and... guh. I'm not even a Toby/Pam person, but this hit me straight in the gut. Poor, poor Toby.
I had a harder time figuring out who everyone else is, but I do love the Dwight one (the one about Angela). Very short, but it sounds just like the way he speaks, and wearing her hair down only four times a month sounds very Angela-like.
My guesses for the other ones: two is Phyllis, four is Kelly, and five is Creed. Am I close? If I am, then it makes sense for me to say this -- you've done such a wonderful job with voices here. Again, you did it with a lot of subtlety, but also with a lot of skill. Character voices can be really difficult, so kudos to you for that! And thanks for this. Really great job.
Author's Response: You got them all right! And thanks for your comments. :)
Date: February 04, 2007 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
OK, I'm a little slow this evening, so I'm going to come out and ask to make sure I'm right...these are Toby, Phyllis, Dwight, Kelly, and Creed, right? I loved the glimpses into their hearts. Really engaging look at the lesser-known denizens of our Office.
Author's Response:
That's exactly who they are. :)
I debated adding each character name (instead of just listing this under "ensemble"), and I think I might go back and change it...