Reviews For Why Not Me?
Reviewer: Beth Signed 
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Date: February 09, 2007 08:00 am Title: Miles Apart
9 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2007 08:00 am Title: Miles Apart
I love this chapter. They are both just so clueless about how the other really feels, and you captured it beautifully! Such a good cliffhanger, please write the conversation soon, or it'll drive me crazy!
Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 05:42 am Title: Miles Apart
Date: February 09, 2007 05:42 am Title: Miles Apart
grrr, i need more!!!! i wanna know what happens now!
Reviewer: mess of jess Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 04:42 am Title: Miles Apart
Date: February 09, 2007 04:42 am Title: Miles Apart
this is really good! i'm looking forward to the rest of it.
i would suggest putting breaks between the p.o.v. shifts, but that's the only thing that caught my eye!
good job ;)