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I don't know if I've reviewed at all, but I'm loving this story, and this chapter hit me hard because of the cat dying. It reminded me of when my cat died a few years ago. He was 17 years old, and I'd had him since I was 5. But with him, we were kind of expecting it, because he was old and had been sick for a while. But it was SO SAD, and my brother had to pick up his body from where he died in our basement, and we all buried the cat in the back yard together. And it was even more sad because my dad couldn't be there because he works for the power company, and it was the same day as the big East Coast Blackout. lol sorry for the personal story, but that's why the cat burial part made me cry. :o(

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! I think the main reason that I had to add Lindie dying is because we just recently lost our beloved gray kitty. He just died. We dont know what happened to him. He was playing with one of our other kittens ten seconds before he just laid down and died. Very unexpected. I don't think I have ever cried that much for a cat before, and I felt like it was a way for me to write about it and remember my cat....so, thanks for your review and I'm deeply sorry for the loss of your cat.

 Thanks for reading.

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I signed up just to tell you that I love your story! One of the most awesome AU Jam pieces out there!! Keep up the great work :)

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I am really glad that you had Jim come to Pam first.  I am glad you mentioned his relationship with Karen, I was wondering about it.  I CAN'T wait to read about their vacation and it is so sweet that Jim is going to pay.  I am as into this story as the actual show!  I love reading this, you really do a great job with it!

Ah!! I can't wait for the vacation!!