Reviews For The Scarlet Letter
Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 
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Date: March 07, 2007 07:36 am Title: A Slumber Party, A Ring, and A Pet
9 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2007 07:36 am Title: A Slumber Party, A Ring, and A Pet
I have a Calico named Callie!
The most recent two chapters were really sweet. One thing, though- you used apostrophes a lot when they weren't needed. Like in the chapter before this, you said "Halpert's and Beasley's" but the apostrophes are not needed because you're making it plural, not possessive.
Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 10:20 pm Title: A Slumber Party, A Ring, and A Pet
Date: March 06, 2007 10:20 pm Title: A Slumber Party, A Ring, and A Pet
Damn, this story is just too cute for words.
I love it.
And the thought of Jim adopting Pam's daughter is just enough to make me tear up a little.
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex
Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 05:13 pm Title: A Slumber Party, A Ring, and A Pet
Date: March 06, 2007 05:13 pm Title: A Slumber Party, A Ring, and A Pet
um, no inspiration from me, sorry, but it was a cute lil fluff happy chapter