Date: June 28, 2007 07:42 pm Title: Clarity
Aww, what a cute chapter with Scarlet and all. I'm glad Jim and Pam know what's been bothering the other person lately and that Jim's really excited about becoming a father. And another chapter so soon! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting. I really hope to get more of this story out soon. So, please keep looking out for updates. Thanks for always willing to express your thoughts on the chapter. It makes me happy to see a 'regular'...:) Thanks again!
Date: June 27, 2007 01:56 pm Title: Clarity
John Mayer IS good. Not that I have heard that song. But, still.
So, it is interesting you bring up a three year old and death. Because, this summer, I am watching a 3 year old. And so, she of coursed asked about my family. When I explained my dad died, she doesn't understand it. She just thinks he isn't around. She knows he is dead, its like, "he doesn't have a seat at the table because hes dead, right?" but she doesn't understand what death really is. I think she may get it a little bit, becuse she had a dog that died. But, I still don't think it is all really connected in her head.
So thats why you needed to know how to phrase two things at the same time. Not quite the mustard/stinky combo I was expecting.
Haha, I loved Jims reaction and Scarlets bad dream, and I am laughing smiling.
Great chapter
Author's Response:
I'm sorry to hear about your father. It's a tough thing to deal with. And, the story about the Scarlet asking her parents about death is a real story that a little girl I know asked her parents...and that was her answer. WALMART! She's too cute for words....And, the dino dream...that's from my childhood. I had a hard time getting rid of that dream...I still remember it.
Love John Mayer! I do...I really do.
Thanks for your thoughts. I hope you enjoyed it!
9 [Report This]Date: June 27, 2007 12:38 pm Title: Clarity
My love for this story is insane. I'm really enjoying this relationship between Jim and Pam; it's different than most of the Jim/Pam relationships we see, married or otherwise. I like that they don't have a perfect marriage, but are working through the problems...and that they're having a baby! Update soon!
Author's Response: You'll have another chapter soon. Thanks for reading and giving the nice compliments! I don't think any marriage is going to be perfect so that's the way that I see them. They are trying....they want it to be perfect and effortless, but it's just not going to be that way. Especially with the problems they face everyday. So, thanks for being so kind and reading.
Date: June 27, 2007 07:37 am Title: Clarity
Superbeta here reporting breaking news: I heart this. Wal-mart? Baby on board (those signs are so silly btw) and the end with Scarlet? Dawesome. And Dinosaurs arevery scary!! True story.
Do you think maybe there's something about the name John that makes us love them so much? JKras, John Mayer? It's a theory i'm willing to test out ;)
So glad to be of help and can't wait to see more (than I already have - which is amazing btw)
Author's Response:
Thanks for coming and reviewing. You're great.
The dinosaur dream is one I've had as a little girl. It was very scary and I still remember it clearly. I was running and running in the dark and a t-rex kept chasing me. It was scary....still is. It's VERY real.
I'm willing to test out your theory too! :)
I'll be sending you the next chapter soon. So, get ready.