Date: February 18, 2007 10:18 pm Title: The Bat
This was a piece you had to write to make yourself feel better after Business School, and this is a piece that I had to read to make myself feel better after Business School. It all works out well in the end. :)
The Ryan/Kelly bit? Loved it! Had me laughing hysterically, because Kelly's dialogue was seriously spot-on. And Ryan's inner thoughts were freaking brilliant. Poor guy, being banished to Kelly's cubicle!
My favorite part was Pam admitting that she'd painted that over the summer, then Jim saying "I wasn't here this summer," with Pam replying "I know. I just missed seeing it everyday so I put it in the painting." Nice touch! I love the idea. :)
Thanks for sharing! I loved it!
Date: February 18, 2007 04:21 pm Title: The Bat
Huuuuuuuuuuge amounts of love for this story. Huge.
I love Dwight's explanation of why Angela isn't ideal for an alliance, and I love Pam's explanation of why Jim's car is in the painting. So perfect.
Author's Response: Huge thanks back! Glad you liked it.
Date: February 18, 2007 03:41 pm Title: The Bat
And that was enough courage for today, she thought.
Hee, exactly. Baby steps, Pamcasso! I loved this. I also noticed the little bit of a jumble in the Creed paragraph, but overall this was great.
Baby steps to the reception desk...
Thanks for noticing the blip. It's been fixed.
Date: February 18, 2007 01:44 pm Title: The Bat
I so hope Jim gets his old desk back ( maybe Michael forces him to ), but I'm worried that the writers are setting us up again! grrrr...as long as Karen doesn't take it!
Thanks for this story. I hope Jim notices Pam's painting too.
Author's Response: I want him to get his old desk back! Thanks for the review.
Date: February 18, 2007 01:05 pm Title: The Bat
Oh My God! I had not even considered what ryan's desk being empty could mean!! this is amazing! and it all makes perfect sense! i loooove it!
Author's Response: I'm just trying to spread the happiness so yes, he gets his desk back. :)
Date: February 18, 2007 01:03 pm Title: The Bat
This was so good :) Seriously, every story was spot on! I love that Dwight kept the broom handle because Jim looked pale, and Jim got his desk back (crossing fingers for that one!) and the Jim/Pam interaction was definitely something I could see on the show, Pam being just brave enough, but not saying so much that it seems out of character. I love your stories :)
Author's Response: You know that keeping the stake is exactly what Dwight would do. Thanks for the review!
Date: February 18, 2007 10:39 am Title: The Bat
Very, very cute! This is definitely what we need after Business School - just a little bit of hope. Just FYI, there are some formatting issues and sentances out of order in the Dwight/Creed section. But still, a great story!
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out -- it's fixed now.
Date: February 18, 2007 10:02 am Title: The Bat
You did a great job on this story! I loved all the little details... the annex ... Creed's stakes ... late-night talks, the ART! Yea. Definitely enjoyed this "addition" to Business School.
Author's Response: And I'm so glad I'm not the only one that calls it the annex. Thanks!
Date: February 18, 2007 09:50 am Title: The Bat
oooh! These were so good!! And I'm SO looking forward to the desk change and when Jim notices the painting. Because, you know, he just has to!!
Author's Response: Of course he has to...and while the cameras are there. Thanks for the review!